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| Fantasy or Reality 2007-12-27 ch 1,  | abuseThis was a very good start. I hope you pick it back up again because I'm very intrigued by it. If you need a beta reader I would gladly offer my services to you. ^__^ |
| queenskin 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseplease update this story. it has an intersting story concept. |
| Shiva-iceflame 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseAre you going to finish this? It sounds good so far. |
| Swordsoul2000 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abusethis is great! i would love to beta if you are having trouble finding one. i self-beta my own stories, but would like to try to be a beta for someone else. just let me know if you are going to continue this. keep up the good work! |
| omymelodynelson 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuse*glare* why is there only one chapter? are you still writing this, or have you given it up? Ilove the building tension. Itachi seems very protective and a bit possessive of Naru-chan. There is such a beautiful melancholic undertone to this scene: not overt, it plays out gently and with subtlety and it's brilliant. Their relationship is so perfect. They're both very in character (considering that Naruto has grown up and stopped being a ponce all the time) Oh ho, just what is Naruto up to? I'm very curious as to what the promise is and who he made it to if it involves releasing the fox. Interesting. ...They don't recognize Naruto? He's rather distictive, as you've said. Did he fake his own death or something? Also, I think you mean godaime: yondaime is dead, right? Unless there's soemthing else going on here that we don't know about because somebody decided to stop writing. I like Sasuke being a human sheild against Sakura. So they didn't know Naruto? and Arashi is still alive? I'm confused as to how all this came to be and I have the distinct impression I'm not going to find out any time soon. and the sandaime is alive too... Where's Orochimaru at? And, for that matter, how did Naruto wind up part of the Akatsuki? Wow, those last two lines were great. "I'm back!" *stab* Haha. I am very much looking forward to more, you have a great set up with this story of yours. I do hope you care to continue it. |
| DarkNinjaBunneh 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is really cool! Update soon please! |
| Mila Crazyx 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAh! Loved this!! there aren't many yaoi stories out there with a badnaruto! I love it! ^^ But it's been a while since u updated, plz plz continue this! PLZZ! (beg in her knees) Hopefully waiting for updates! ^.~ |
| Cherry Daze 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat start. I am really interested to know what happens next and especially where this is going. This first chapter has definitely gotten me intrigue. |
| Love Squared 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuselets see what's today oh 2/9/06... and this was published 4/8/05...?? i read this story when u published it and forgot about it until now soo... i wanna say that i love ur story and it is very interesting and if u don't update soon i'm gonna email u many messages telling u that u should! yes this is a threat... j/k but i will email u! i really like this story and i love the itachi/naruto pairing so plz UPDATE SOON! |
| Pocky Whore 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseNaruto turned evil? w00t go Naruto, I knew you had it in you! Update soon, I really like where this story is going, and I loved the ItaNaru part. It was awsome. Love, Pocky ** |
| Angel-Goddess 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseOoh, interesting, very interesting. Itachi is so smexy...! I'm hoping to see more Itachi-goodness asap! Don't make him too evil like all the others do, ne? This is an interesting kind of AU fic, seeing as Naruto seems really powerful, and still has the whisker marks, and the fact that the Yondaime is still alive. I don't know how that would work. But meh. It's your story, and I can't wait to see what comes out of it. ^__^ Sore ja, keep on writing, I can't wait to read some more. You've got me hooked already. |
| obsessed_kitsune 2005-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseplz update! i HATE cliffhangers-THEY SUCK! Wonderful story though. i love itanaru pairings SUGOI!(means great). I luv yr storis! ("_) |
| RaitenKitsune 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abusehey that was interesting cant wait for the next chapter |
| Cringe 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abusePlease continue it! =D |
| Spiel 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abusePretty interesting^^ Want to continue reading as soon as possible, so if ya would please resume writing it'd be pretty cool. You seem to take your time, or don't you intend on continueing this story? Would suck, so please *insert puppy-look* post another chapter, or two, or hundred :P Bye Spiel |