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Reviews for: To Remember a Beautiful Death: Rewritten - Page 1 of 2
Kitten630
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
This was so beautiful. I've always been afraid of death, at first the story made death sound heavenly. But then feeling that pain as you looked into the past, I just cried. The weird thing was, no matter how much this made me cry, I made no noise. This was just so peaceful and wonderful. (Hey! I know how I can cheer up! I'll just think of the rabid monkey thing! Oh yeah, I feel better now!)
kinger810
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
Truly one of the very best stories I have ever read.
ItsADog
2006-08-31 . chapter 1
Great story, I would have never thought of anything like that, in a story or otherwise. The descriptions were vivid and exceptional. It was intriguing to read what may happen to Lilo if Stitch were removed from her life. Great Story
K9 the First
2006-07-18 . chapter 1
*sniff* That...was so...BEAUTIFUL!! T_T
Tragic warrior
2006-06-25 . chapter 1
Very sad story. I cried a little, I'll admit, but it was a great story. I enjoyed reading it.
Da bigg guy
2006-03-13 . chapter 1
My god thats long for a oneshot. nice long happy vew of the afterlife, mushi ending
Imperator-Jim
2006-01-26 . chapter 1
Wow... that was Beautiful, such descriptiveness. Its wierd, its almost like I felt what Stitch was experiencing, almost :). But seriously I've never read anything that made me fell so immersed into the character's fellings and state of mind. I love your writing style. keep up the great fics, read ya later.
Ted
2005-09-18 . chapter 1
I had read the original version of this. I thought that version was good. But this version was great!
ex624Angel
2005-07-30 . chapter 1
Oh...wow...this is just...wow..I love it...I havent been on in along time, I re-read over your reviews, and...I'm back, completely back, And Im not leaving again, unless I go into a coma XD Anyway, I can't believe this doesn't have any more reviews, its so awesome!
Alohilani
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
Oh my GOSH that was CREEPY! I loved it, though. It was creepy, but in a good way. It made me think.
Celebi
2005-06-18 . chapter 1
Review number 1. I thought I'd do these in order, starting with the shortest.

I have to say, this is absolutely beautiful. I love how you describe the ways that concepts can't be translated into comprehensible formats - that kind of description doesn't need words, it comes across perfectly just by saying that it's indescribable.

I also liked that 'weightless' feeling that was added in - I've often wondered what it would be like to not have the weight of a flesh body, and it fits right in there well.

I realised who the two light characters were after the 'seen them in photos' line, and it immediately interested me. Suddenly the whole thing began to make more sense - it was really an 'Aww' moment.

The way so much depth has been added to Lilo - she must have had it, but it's never been seen like this before - and how Stitch recalls the events of the film... it perfectly captures how the meaning of this story has to come across. And then the end, how we see that Lilo practically killed herself - it's so heartbreaking, knowing she did it because of complete and utter loneliness, and how that ties in with 'Nobody getting left behind'.

You are absolutely the master of description and I can't think of anything that better represents the special kind of love Lilo and Stitch have for each other than this story.
Xoverguy
2005-06-01 . chapter 1
Oh my God! I am utterly speechless! You did this? You are an incredible master of description! Way above my level! I cannot say any more, I can't find the words. You are now in my authors favorite list. I hope you continue with your stories. Very good work! (No, thats an understatement.) Congratulations!
BlackDragon1588
2005-04-19 . chapter 1
no matter how you write it, that is a good story. great job!
Baal 626
2005-04-12 . chapter 1
Fantastic! Definitely better than the original version.

I particularly liked how you had only Lilo read the letter this time. This was, after all, more about Stitch's feelings for her than the rest of his family.
Loyal Lady Pisces
2005-04-09 . chapter 1
Truely better that it's original verison, your grammer and use of words simply amazes me. You discerption of Stitch's experiances and emotions are far better and surpass my skills, I really felt the characters emotions and you got their feelings dead on and beautifully. Very powerful and full of meaning, I can begin to say how much I love this fic because my feelings would not come close. You rock WS. :)
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