 Kitten630 2009-01-29 . chapter 1This was so beautiful. I've always been afraid of death, at first the story made death sound heavenly. But then feeling that pain as you looked into the past, I just cried. The weird thing was, no matter how much this made me cry, I made no noise. This was just so peaceful and wonderful. (Hey! I know how I can cheer up! I'll just think of the rabid monkey thing! Oh yeah, I feel better now!) |
 kinger810 2007-06-24 . chapter 1Truly one of the very best stories I have ever read. |
 ItsADog 2006-08-31 . chapter 1 Great story, I would have never thought of anything like that, in a story or otherwise. The descriptions were vivid and exceptional. It was intriguing to read what may happen to Lilo if Stitch were removed from her life. Great Story |
 K9 the First 2006-07-18 . chapter 1*sniff* That...was so...BEAUTIFUL!! T_T |
 Tragic warrior 2006-06-25 . chapter 1Very sad story. I cried a little, I'll admit, but it was a great story. I enjoyed reading it. |
 Da bigg guy 2006-03-13 . chapter 1My god thats long for a oneshot. nice long happy vew of the afterlife, mushi ending |
 Imperator-Jim 2006-01-26 . chapter 1 Wow... that was Beautiful, such descriptiveness. Its wierd, its almost like I felt what Stitch was experiencing, almost :). But seriously I've never read anything that made me fell so immersed into the character's fellings and state of mind. I love your writing style. keep up the great fics, read ya later. |
 Ted 2005-09-18 . chapter 1 I had read the original version of this. I thought that version was good. But this version was great! |
 ex624Angel 2005-07-30 . chapter 1Oh...wow...this is just...wow..I love it...I havent been on in along time, I re-read over your reviews, and...I'm back, completely back, And Im not leaving again, unless I go into a coma XD Anyway, I can't believe this doesn't have any more reviews, its so awesome! |
 Alohilani 2005-06-28 . chapter 1Oh my GOSH that was CREEPY! I loved it, though. It was creepy, but in a good way. It made me think. |
 Celebi 2005-06-18 . chapter 1Review number 1. I thought I'd do these in order, starting with the shortest.
I have to say, this is absolutely beautiful. I love how you describe the ways that concepts can't be translated into comprehensible formats - that kind of description doesn't need words, it comes across perfectly just by saying that it's indescribable.
I also liked that 'weightless' feeling that was added in - I've often wondered what it would be like to not have the weight of a flesh body, and it fits right in there well.
I realised who the two light characters were after the 'seen them in photos' line, and it immediately interested me. Suddenly the whole thing began to make more sense - it was really an 'Aww' moment.
The way so much depth has been added to Lilo - she must have had it, but it's never been seen like this before - and how Stitch recalls the events of the film... it perfectly captures how the meaning of this story has to come across. And then the end, how we see that Lilo practically killed herself - it's so heartbreaking, knowing she did it because of complete and utter loneliness, and how that ties in with 'Nobody getting left behind'.
You are absolutely the master of description and I can't think of anything that better represents the special kind of love Lilo and Stitch have for each other than this story. |
 Xoverguy 2005-06-01 . chapter 1Oh my God! I am utterly speechless! You did this? You are an incredible master of description! Way above my level! I cannot say any more, I can't find the words. You are now in my authors favorite list. I hope you continue with your stories. Very good work! (No, thats an understatement.) Congratulations! |
 BlackDragon1588 2005-04-19 . chapter 1no matter how you write it, that is a good story. great job! |
 Baal 626 2005-04-12 . chapter 1Fantastic! Definitely better than the original version.
I particularly liked how you had only Lilo read the letter this time. This was, after all, more about Stitch's feelings for her than the rest of his family. |
 Loyal Lady Pisces 2005-04-09 . chapter 1Truely better that it's original verison, your grammer and use of words simply amazes me. You discerption of Stitch's experiances and emotions are far better and surpass my skills, I really felt the characters emotions and you got their feelings dead on and beautifully. Very powerful and full of meaning, I can begin to say how much I love this fic because my feelings would not come close. You rock WS. :) |