Aww, Logan is sooo sweet when it comes to "his daughter"... his daughter! Logan's kid... I rather loooove the sound of that! And X finds Logan's scent comforting, too...

Eh, Logan's claws really come in handy, don't they? Once used for apples, and now pancakes! Awesome! :)

Haha! I'm loving how well Storm truly knows Logan and his ways... :-)

Shish kabob? Hehehehe, Logan...

Sarah Logan? I like the sound of that, too! Very much. I'm surprised you didn't give her the name Laura, but hey, she came from Sarah, right? :) Plus everyone else uses Laura, so a change couldn't be bad.

Oh, this is simply an awesome piece! I sincerely hope you decide to continue it!

It's a great first chapter! Can't wait for the next one :D

Definatly a favourite, I would really love to see more X-23 from you, or anything really, you're a very good writer :)

Great so far. You should continue it.

Love it! You should definitely continue this story, because I'm already hooked and want to read more. :)

Please update at some point in time! I really love it!

Ah... Reference to Sarah Kinney, X23's 'mom', eh? Please continue this. I love it so much...

Please please update I LOVE X-23 and Cannonball and there aren't any !You are my only hope !

Nice first chapter. Liked how you phrased it :D

More please!

I loved it! more please ;)

OI CONTINUE OR MY KITTY POWERS WILL POUNCE ON YOU!

is it over coz if it is "shakes fist"

p.s if u like x-23 u should by the x-23 comic book series there is two

inocence lost tell of how she was made and escaped it 6 part series

and NYX or NYC not sure is about how she lived on the streets

THIS. IS. ABSOLUTELY. FUCKIN BRILLIANT!

Seriously. I cannot find a single God-damn thing wrong with this story. Solid 10/10. Honestly, this is completely fantastic! And I like the title too. Also makes you feel kinda bad for X-23 at some points. Anywho, great work. keep it up!

Let me guess you picked Sarah cuz of Sarah Kinney? I'd have picked Laura but this is really good and there aren't any real big problems on continutiy or anything so please update!

fantastic story so far, can't wait to see what happens next, i know why you named her sarah, but i won't say anything to ruin the suprise, i hope for whatever reason you had surgery you recover, i know surgery's no fun, anyways please update very soon.