That was scary. I did get a little confused about the mist until I read your explanation. I'm relieved that everyone is alive. Good job on showing how money-greedy people are, and how the team cares for one another!

Wicked story : ) I love the mood

Okay, hi. You scared the freaking crap out of me. Because of the bus and the mist, I was starting to think, " Oh... no... Nononononono. Not Battle Royale!"

Don't get me wrong. I love BR. But. Not mushed in with PoT. So yeah. You nearly gave me a heart attack, but good fic.

Very nicely written. Haha, I also thought there was a slight Momoryo slant. But anyway, what is it with the mist? From what I read, it seemed to be all planned? But it seemed kinda ghostly. Kindred Spirit? If I don't remember wrongly, it's ZhenQing right? Haha, not very sure.

Kindred Spirit eh?

I like how everyone did his part to help Ryoma out. I still can't believe that someone who works in a _hospital_ would be that callous but... well, enshrouded in a mist of poverty, as you put it, can do that to you.

Nicely written with a very good flow of words. A+ definitely. :)

how did they pay for that hospital stuff?? oh well. Anyways nice for a first time fic.!

Kindred Spirit eh? Is it that Cantonese drama from Hong Kong... I watched that show long time ago... There was so much drama in that series... It was really long... Where are you from?

Oh yeah, Your fic was really sweet ^^ Is there a hint of MomoRyo?

...that was really good.
The descriptions were fascinating and the story was well developed.
As for Ryuzaki's stupidity...well, we all need quirky plot devices (if we even bother with a plot)
^_^