 strayphoenix 2005-07-06 . chapter 1i have read this story six times and i just realized that i haven'y reviewed! bad stray! bad kitty! *slaps self*...ow
anyways, it was really good and very believable. great job!
JOTT 4ever and ever and ever and ever...
-stray |
 jlhx 2005-05-20 . chapter 1jean and scott r perfect for each other and btw i love this story :) |
 Telepathic Angel 2005-04-26 . chapter 1Absolutely gorgeous fic! And I agree with Jean Mrs. Incredible getting stuck in the doors was the best bit! This story rocked! You should continue it! (extra exclamation marks for emphasis)! Write many many more JOTT stories! JOTT 4eva and eva Amen! |
 SeductiveCurse 2005-04-11 . chapter 1Not an X-Men buff, but I have seen the movies and also some of the cartoons. (My God, I sound so pathetic right now.) In other words, from my knowledge of X-Men as a series, this was nice. I mean, maybe it's just because you're a great writer, but this was nice. I'm not a fan of fluff (cynical? me?), but this was just enough character interaction without fluff for me to enjoy it. Luverly. -petpet- |
 Rogue14 2005-04-11 . chapter 1Aww...this was a cute fic, just like your name ^_^ |
 Iceglitter 2005-04-10 . chapter 1Aw, great fanfic. |
 Helen 2005-04-10 . chapter 1 Aww! What a sweet fic. I thought it was great when Scott said :
“No! No! I did! I want another go, is all!” Scott practically yelled, then caught himself. “Aw, **.”
That was my favourite part, I thought it was hallarious. Keep writing please this is a great fic! |
 FastpitchDevil 2005-04-10 . chapter 1 That was awsome! It was like so good. You are unbelieveable, that was like one of the best jott fics I have ever read. Are you going to continue it? Please do, it's awsome. |
 Wen1 2005-04-10 . chapter 1GRREAT !
CARRY ON !
JOTT FOREVER!
Wen |
 Diaz F 2005-04-09 . chapter 1Nice story!! I like every part of it! |
 slickboy444 2005-04-09 . chapter 1Nice little story you got here! It shows a much lighter side to Scott and Jean that people often don't see because they're too shallow to realize the responsibilities those two force upon themselves and how it affects their actions. Seeing them when they don't have to deal with the stresses is a good way to show their true sides and you do an excellent job of portraying them! It was a great, fun read and I applaud you for doing it! I really enjoyed this fic and I hope you write more! Keep up the fantastic work! Slickboy out. |
 Icy Discordia 2005-04-09 . chapter 1^_^ Yes, Jott very yum. I loved it! There just aren't enough good Jotts out there. Thank you! |
 ingrid 2005-04-09 . chapter 1 i love this story. please continue it. please i beg you. or else keep writing jott
:) |