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chibi houkou
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
A truly nice story. I haven't read such a good KakaRin fic in a while. I especially loved the part with Gai expressing his views on love.

Keep on writing!
chewyish
2007-12-27 . chapter 1
fantastic oneshot!
made me bawl my eyeballs out ;_;
Eldr-Fire
2007-04-06 . chapter 1
And how could any KakaRin that you write NOT make someone feel anything, I wonder?
-Kai Isolated-
2006-11-08 . chapter 1
this is wonderful! i really like gai-sensei moments! i can really picture him doing that.

the explaination of what kakashi and rin feels are perfect, we can know what actually goes in their minds.

i think this great since i really think kakashi really needs a break.

i do hope rin isn't dead in the real manga! ;p
openwindow2
2006-07-27 . chapter 1
LOVE IT!!
all pity choked
2006-07-20 . chapter 1
I love your KakashiRin.
You right their lives, angst, and love so beautifully; and I've fallen in love with your characterization of Rin (and Kakashi too, but I think your Rin is my favourite of all the Rins I've read.)
kage-youkai girl
2006-06-09 . chapter 1
That was kawaii.I can see scenes for the whole fanfic in my head.I like it.Keep up the great work.
ShikamaruRocks
2006-04-19 . chapter 1
This is such a beautiful fic! More than anyone else in Naruto, I want Kakashi to end up being happy, but I just don't see that happening. So, to read a fic like this, in which everything I wish could happen to him does, is very refreshing. It's tragic and wonderful, bitter-sweet really. My favorite paragraph:

But they need each other. Because when his nightmares come she'll wake him up and remind him that someone is still with him. If she feels too afraid to let him go he'll stay with her until she can. When he starts to slip away from stable in his painfully precarious mind she'll try to catch him before he can fall too hard. If she can't keep down tears he'll keep them secret between them and try to make it better. When they both miss Obito and their Sensei and the lives they should have led more than they can bear they just look into each other's eyes and try to survive the night together. When they start to shake with horror over the things they've seen and done and feel they kiss each other and make love until they can't breathe and they've forgotten everything down to their own names.

That's so heart-wrenching. You've done a wonderful job. My highest praises.
Mamolove
2006-04-09 . chapter 1
You bring maturity to the Rin-Kakashi relationship. I was especially taken in by your writing style, the way you take the time to develop how Rin and Kakashi naturally blended their lives together upon her return to Konoha. Not superficial, and yet, not too melodramatic. You have a very good concept of Rin's character, and I can only look forward to more Kakashi-Rin stories from you! Thanks for writing this!
Matt and T.K.
2006-03-27 . chapter 1
i definetly strted smiling when i read this.-TK
Bullwinkle's Lady
2006-01-23 . chapter 1
OMG, this is such a nice fic! I love all of your fics of the past! They're so good, so creative, so realistic. Good job.
wildcatt
2005-11-06 . chapter 1
So beautiful. I never was really interested in Kakashi/rin until I read your fics. The idea of Kakashi not going home because he was scared she wouldnt be there nearly made me cry >> lovely.
Pointed Teeth
2005-09-22 . chapter 1
Generally I dislike het pairings in fanfiction (just a quirk, I guess) but this one I very much liked. You did a great job on it.
hiro
2005-09-14 . chapter 1
absolutely, absolutely beautiful.

I can't figure out how you can write something so... wonderful like this. I really love the whole feeling of the story, and the pain and the happiness and the fear and the hope and the love and the overall tenderness kakashi and rin feels to each other.

Absolutely beautiful. I adore this fic so much. It makes me hope kishimoto-sensei will read your fics and include this into his storyline.

Wonderful. Just... wonderful.
Michii
2005-07-19 . chapter 1
So she wasn't dead after all...nice twist liked this one too! By the way, your Gai-sensei moment...loved it.
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