| Reviews for Miasma Child |
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Author sama277 6/20/06 . chapter 2Wow...you really switched around the story, didnt you? LoL, like some alternate universe, or whatever! Meh, -shrugs- I think I like yours better! So yeah, I'm so happy you made the Selkie a Raccoon Tail! Most people make the Selkie a Wolfie! I love your writing style! I'm so interested in what's going to happen to that Clavat! Please keep writing! Meh, for some reason, the Selkie seems really...perky... too perky and happy-go-lucky for a Selkie to be. Please dont make the Clavat all distant and sad and angsty and stuff... Hmm...but it's your fic, do what you want. I still love it! I'm so glad I found this! Please continue it! I cant wait! Loyal author/reader/reviwer: Author_sama277 |
funkymoleperson 1/15/06 . chapter 2I must say, you write WELL, my friend. Good job so far! Even though it's been a long time since you last updated, according to this page, I have a glimmer of hope that you might continue working on it someday. But then, I've seen plenty of stories like this that writers abandon, so pardon me if my hopes aren't too high. However...whether you ever continue this or not, I think you've done a good job so far. Your writing style is fluid and well-rounded. So, I think that even if you don't continue work on this story in particular, you should continue to write and scale to even greater heights, because you have the potential. You may want to work on length a little, but otherwise I like what you've written. May the Muse be with you, funkymoleperson |
FlikFreak 10/29/05 . chapter 2Very nice story so far! I'm really into it. Keep it up! ((Sorry for the short review, my mind is at a blank today so I can barely type. ;; Gomen!)) |
PowBlade 9/27/05 . chapter 2Great job!Please -Ai is good...good for the soul..like Cyrstal Chronicles..Update soonish! :D |
LittleMissUKE 8/17/05 . chapter 2hey! i love your story! plz update! hey did you know that you spelled my name? yeah my name is Gwen and his Name is Gwyn weird huh? c ya! Gwen |
Midnyte Wolf 7/17/05 . chapter 2 You and this story are just too adorable not to review to! And ohmigosh! It's shounen-ai! That is what I can searchin' for after being wonderfully introduced to Crystal Chronicles. And you were here! You and your story like an answer to my prayers! And it's really not that bad, not that bad at all. In fact it's very lovely but it doesn't seem that planned out or described. Oh yes, you do a wonderful job as it is, no doubt, but I thought it could be improved my just the tiniest bit and totally rock my world! ...more! Still, this story seems so adorable and I'm just gonna have to keep with it against my concious will. So please update again soon! I'll be stalking the fic until you do! Ta! |
ko 6/28/05 . chapter 2 You have another fan. Please continue. |
Rinku123 6/25/05 . chapter 2This is a pretty good story! Just so you know, the blue creatures that lead the caravan are called papaopamuses. Stupidest name in the world, but oh well... ;) |
Elegant Spiral 6/14/05 . chapter 2Wow! this is really good so far! I wanna know what happens next! Please? (gives big puppy dog eyes) Will you make the next chapie soon pwease? |
Iron Reaver 6/10/05 . chapter 2*nods* It has the potential to become a better story, but there are some spelling issues that prevent it from being the best it could be. Other than that, I'd like to see what you can do with this story. |
SugarHighHiei 6/6/05 . chapter 1Hey. Lovely story, dear. n.n Quite lovely, indeed. And, up there, who's fanfic story are you talking about? o_o I'm glad to see my shounen-ai/yaoi relationships are spreading. Yay. |
The Full Metal Alchemist 5/7/05 . chapter 1Wahh! I love this story! You're so awesome! Update soon! I can't wait until the next chapter. I really should jump on the bandwagon you and SugarHighHiei started. X3 Yeah..I should. More shounen-ai! :D Much Luff! TFMA |
pensive 4/13/05 . chapter 1 hehe...i'm actually writing here to ask you if you're going to finish "angel of mine." I really love that story and i know tons of other ppl who love it too. it would be great if you finished it, thanks so much |