oh yayz
anywho
update please... and uh
thankyou for the music! i mean... *cough* ehem... fanfic
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anyway!
XD

this was absolutely hilarious!!

Very nicely done, Zoro was my favourite merely because there were THREE fircrackers but EIGHT firecrackers mightn't be enough.

It's obvious there stores aren't anywhere as developed as your single Naruto story was, but the humor you use and the writing style are still similar.

I wish you luck in the future!

I love Zoro's parents; his mother sounds cool, and it's easy to see where Zoro got his sense of direction from!

Wow, that was hilarious. I liked Zoro's mom and the little bit part his dad got. "Where the hell am I?" That was great. I love Usopp's dream too. Please write more!

Ha! This is hilarious!

I actually liked Zoro's mom. Somehow, that seems just like the sort of mother he would have had. :)

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ;D

This actually explains ALLOT about Luffy.

"Shanks figured he may be traumatizing Luffy for life, but who cares! This was fun!" LOL! ^^

this was hysterical! It not easy being green! ilove this title!! Please countiune!! This made ne laugh till my brains came out my nose! We need mor efagics like this! Kepp up the great work!

oh my! Too much! Too much! *laughs even harder* I loved the Usopp story.

Oh, that was fun:D This latest chapter was my favourite. Very silly and entertaining. Loved the Luffy chapter as well,a nd I thought Zoro's family was amusing. I'll look forward to the Sanji chapter. Cheers:)

i wanna read the 4th one! i luv sanji! could u do an Ace one?

The Princess bride refrence is wunderbar. That must be the few momants in Uusop's life that he tells the truth.

i love the ending, and what was with the sneezing?

GREAT!

funny