Sorry halo 3 isn't hav'nt anything to do with this.

Interesting... :)

Its quite a interesting idea. The story of what if dr harsley and kelly were in Halo 3.

Its been a while since you updated. Are you going to continue this story?

T&R

why wait for halo 3? Just make up stuff! That's what fanfiction is all about!

I like this, is this the real thing for Halo 3? seriously is it?

-Threehorn

Nice.

I like. Ignore such half-baked critisism from people such as Myreal. You may have screwed up a bit on the ranks but why should that matter? This is still a really good beginning for a Halo 3 story. I would suggest writing that story. Halo 3 is going to take a while to come out and why not make up your impression of what will happen? You neatly tied in everything that was left open at the end of First Strike and Halo 2. That alone is worth some congratulations. Keep it up.

That's fine, Baker. Just watch your spelling and grammar. Other than that, t'is good. And to Myrael, COMMANDER Keyes isn't dead. CAPTAIN Keyes is dead. He got promoted, remember? I don't think this is bad at all. I just think you could expand it. Don't wait for Halo 3. Just make up an alternate. Also, don't feel bad. I've seen worse stories...much worse. And this doesn't even come near them. I hope you continue.

That was awesome! I think you should turn this into a full-length story, and write what you think will happen in Halo 3.

I'm sorry, but this sucks.

First of all, COMMANDER Keyes is dead.

LIEUTENANT AMANDA Keyes, however, is alive, and SHE is a woman, not "Sir"

This is pretty much one of the worst Halo fic's i've read.

Good job, go slit your wrists.

Thoughtful, original and well-written. I love it!