WOW! please, please continue the history...please is interestant and fantastic...continue soon.

PD: because you don't leave that Kicker him of some energon so that it is but touching or in other words that Kicker works for a while for him and then you, notleaves with Alpha Q

Please Please update this is such a good story, so is the other one they are too good to not complete

Okay you want to know more opinion cause I can't say. Let's start with your chapters here they're uhh... what's the word I'm lookin' for Oh! SHOORT! That's people keep wanting to review you! You keep writing such short chapters that even one chapter can make the reader not want to reader. And you take way to long on your chapters and could you please write longer chapters! It gets people ** off after a while and well I'm just friggn' ** right now! Write longer chapters or it's just like you don't care of how important and detailed of a writer you want to be!

The plot is a good idea, however, I think for this 'alternate choice', you should just make it into its own seperate story.
Does it make sense? The same beginning, and the two seperate choices.

One captor to another? THAT"S CUTE! So how do Optimist and the others realize that Rodimus now has him?

What chapter will you be contiuning? Up-Date soon.

Confusing... yet... I kind of seem to get it. -_-

hello very good the I surrender, with which Kicker is leaving its character to a side hey... interesting he hears, but because this tired Kicker says although it had been in battle was he/she resting to say it in the megatron ship it should have been recovered this way you don't believe? but good it is your history and this very good one you continue her soon we see each other.

THANK YOU for UPDATING!

Hey this is pretty good I like how you portrayed Demolisher here well continue soon

** DONT STOP WHEN IT GETS INTERESTING ** THATS ** ME OFF NOW AS SOON AS IT GETS INTERESTING YOU ** MAKE (TO BE CONTINUED)...sorry I have low
temper problem anyways this is a very awsome fic but
YOU MAKE TOO ** SHORT WHEN IT GETS GOOD...oop
almost last my temper again anyways cant wait for the
next chapter

Perfecto! (perfect in spanish) I really like the way you put Kicker and Demolisher in there together. And i think you should go with an alternate chapter. It would help your story. But making another story wouldn't besuch a great idea for my opinion. Please update even more sooner if you can please!

Sweet chap! Up-Date ASAP! Don't let Demmy die, he's sorta O.K right now!!

Hey ShamanQueens maybe you should do alternate chapters like some goosebumps books. One where he does except and one where he does and what happens from there so everyone will be happy I like what happens either way

Okay! I'm gonna tell ya three things thta's wrong with this story. 1 the chapters need to be longer! 2 not let Kicker fall for estupido' (stupid in spanish)Megatron's idea! 3 PLEEASSE! Hurry up with the next chapter! Please take this advice and I'm sure this story will be put on a lot of favorites lists. P.S. Me Likey! ^_^