most amazing story i have ever read but just a head's up, i think something went wrong with your account because the text is all clumped together. now, this story is amazing but i can't read like this so i've only read up to chapter 5! please fix up!

A lovely story which developed well, but the lack of paragraphs etc in later chapters did make it difficult to read. (This may be a problem with the site rather than your layout).

I'm really, REALLY enjoying this story, but I kindly ask that you format chapter six and beyond's content? Please?

Good story. I really enjoyed it.

this was a really good story, took some time for me to get through it, lazy me lol but it is a great story

I enjoyed this story. Thanks for writing it.

Bravo! Encore! Bravisimo! I *LOVED* it! :-) Especially the little "reference" to 'Children of the Gods' there at the end... For a while there..I thought I was gonna have to break out the Kleenex... I know it's a DARN good story when I can "see" it play out...as if it was a real episode... Good use of flow..and you had the characters right on... Enough gushing? :-p

Is it finished already!And the story is GREAT!

I liked it.

Hey!

Cool fic, angst and everything, and most important, an happy ending! (gotta love those)!

I love you story very much. Thanks for writing it. I love the ending.

BRILLIANT! I don't know whether I've reviewed the other chapters, I probably have some of them, but the whole series is AMAZING! You write so well, it's like you can describe everything really well, but it's still really 'lively' and it's not at all boring. Please write more fics, I really think you have talent for writing!

Eeee! Rad ending!

I really enjoyed your story

It was very well writen.

Thaaaaaaaank Yooooouuuu! This is one of the best series I've come across in a while, and being a writer of series myself, I know how tough it is to stay motivated and keep the plot fresh in your mind. You did an excellent job here. I have to say, it's refreshing to find a story where Sam and Jack's character's don't change when they enter into a romantic relationship, not to mention Daniel's or Teal'c's. It's a great token to your writing ability to keep all these things together, and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more stories from you. Bring 'em on!