this is freaking epic.

i'm another catholic, but i have nothing but good words for this fic. wonderful writing, interesting characterization, and hilarious reviews.

please, for the love of god (lmfao, no pun intended), continue this story. (:

Ryu: Wow… I LOVE that… hehe… Lucifer is Gabriel’s god… that concept is SO hot…
Sylv: Hell yeah… that a simple capitalisation could do so much… *drools*
Soma: Well, I hope you’re gonna continue this story, cos we sure as hell are most interested in the outcome… Ja ne!

Very good. Please update soon.

quite interesting.

This story wins in so many ways it's unbelievable, especially since it expounds on my own personal belief of why Gabby was exiled. It's also charmingly written and very sad. Poor Gabby.
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Interesting... I'd like to see more xx

Excellent job with this fanfiction; it puts forward some interesting ideas and is well written. Keep up the good work.

Actually, I LOVE this story. LOVE.

REDNECK STORIES WTF?! YOU WROTE BLASPHEMOUS MODERNISED CRUD AND THEN YOU DARE TO INSULT THE PURE-HEARTED CHRISTIANS FOR WHOM THE BIBLE SECTION WAS DESIGNED?

Actually, I liked the story; you write very well, and the dialogue is engaging. However, please not to be being hurtful to Christians who want to display their love for God. Be grateful there are no Mary Sues who Jesus fell in love with during his time on Earth. Seriously. BE GRATEFUL. (And as far as I know, none of their stories were homophobic. Not all Christians ARE homophobic. Really; it surprised me too, but some even read slash! Apparently some read Bible slash!)

Wow! I really like this! Will there be any more chapters?
*Feels sudden urge check out what else is under the Bible category*

I liked your story (so far- are you writing more?) and read the reviews and I had a question for everybody-
do you realize that this is a story?

Not the truth, a story. Stories do not always express the beliefs of the writers. In life it is important to remember that.

Personally bible slash can go either way for me (depending on how graphic etc. it is, but that's true with any story), but the idea of it I don't mind at all.

I don't know much about angles or Lucifer but I thought it was well writen. And I like Terry Prachett.

I was getting bored skimming past all of the Jesus stories in the Bible section, thanks for something different for all of us Old Testementers out there. ;)

i hope you appreciate all us readers who will be throughly utterly damned for liking this. let's write in hell together.

Please update it again! It's such an awesome story. ^^

*does a happy little dance* Slash in the bible, huh? I love it! This story is amazing! Please keep writing. I'm a slash writer and i know its annoying to get flamed all the time but don't worry about it, if they were so "Christian" They wouldn't put other peoples hard work down like that. i'm Wiccan so this is so alright with me. Im fact, I love this paring. Updae soon please!

Oh... I liked the other chapters, but this trumps them, for sure... Gr, usually I like Michael, but I really don't like him here... Asshole. >.< Not that I'm faulting you for that. * story alertifies * Can't wait to see more. ^-~

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