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Emch
2007-04-28
ch 11, anon.
abuseGreat fic. Congrats! I like the different view of the story. I'm watching right now the trird season (Chapter 08) and I don't like how things are going on. I think I Like more your idea than the original one.

Bye.
astrakane
2006-03-18
ch 11,
abusei really love your fic! i love Susan, i love mike, i love the world ! loli've read all your fic in few hours ^^ i can't wait to read the next chapetr ^^( and i like everything to lose too ^^)
ComicBookFreak
2006-02-03
ch 10,
abuseIf you wanted to add a really interesting conflict, it would be cool if you brought up the fact of Zach being Mike's son. Of course, that would be awkward for Julie, who would technically be his sister if Susan and Mike got married...Still, it would be neat to see how they worked that out. I can't wait to see what will happen after the baby is born: Susan will be frazzled, Mike will probably choke a couple times but still be a natural, and Julie will be a great big sister. Anyway, please update, your story is too awesome to discontinue!
Virginie
2006-01-31
ch 11, anon.
abuseWhat a beautiful story !
I love especially when Mike tries to reconquer Susan when they are by the doctor whereas she does nothing but criticize it. And then when she is jealous of the doctor...
I can't wait for the next chapter .
ComicBookFreak
2006-01-15
ch 11,
abuseThis story rocks! I wish it had gone this way on the show. I'm glad Susan and Mike are having a boy; that's what I was hoping. Please continue!
simbagirl
2006-01-10
ch 11,
abuseLoving it! Please Continue soon.
Hanniballover1181
2005-12-14
ch 11,
abusePlease do continue!
Flick
2005-09-15
ch 11, anon.
abuseHi noticed its been a long time since ur last update. Hope everything is okay.I love ur fics. Please please please update soon. do you plan on finishing the fic, cos this is one of my favs as well as Everythng to Lose and would love to read futher. It would be a shame if u stopped writing.
Tiffany
2005-09-09
ch 11, anon.
abuseI love it. It seems so real, like a believable espisode. Please finish!
laura
2005-09-05
ch 11, anon.
abuseHey, GREAT story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Could you by any chance tell me when it comes out?? If its a hassle don't worry, I'll just check the website. Thanks. And keep up the great work!
Rachel
2005-08-30
ch 11, anon.
abuseI love this story. It is really good. I can't wiat for the next chaper
Missed Promises
2005-08-13
ch 1,
abusePossibly my favourite story- just can't stop reading it. You could have made it a bit harder for Susan to forgive Mike but other than that excellent
Dani
2005-08-06
ch 11, anon.
abuseHi there. i have just discovered this fic and it is great i love the way you write and you have captured the characters of Mike and Susan brilliantly. I noticed its been a while since u updated are you planning on continuing to write cos i think you should as ur really talented.
Nicky
2005-08-02
ch 7, anon.
abuseI really love this story. Its a great story, especially if you are a susan and mike fan. I can't wait for the next chapter to be up.
cemicool
2005-08-02
ch 11,
abuseActually I had a question about borders, how do you get that line up there after the authors' note?
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