Awesome chapter! The description of every inch of Persia's outfit was perfect! And Persia naming Cole as her dad...it...it just brings a tear to my *manly* eye (lol, trying not to sound too femine ;)

Typical Phoebe **rolls eyes** And Prue **rolls eyes again** any chance to snap a few pics! I wonder who or what is gonna interupt Persia at her prom? :S

also, u said rjf writes femininely, and guys cant write well, so where do i fit in? ;)

update soon please

will persia end up pregnant like phoebe?

Update a.s.a.p! I cant wait till the next chapter! :)

*thumbs up*

yeah, that's so kewl! hmm, wonder if u could get ne more red in there, lol. luv the story, plz keep going!

I have a number of ideas for how the darkness in this plot is going to play out, I think I'll reserve judgement until I've read more. Although most of my theories involve Persia getting hurt psychically or mentally, so I hope that doesn't happen!

Great chapter! I could just see Phoebe getting everyone out of the shot so she could see Persia make her big entrance on the stairs! Nice to see a bit of normality within the family and that even a Halliwell is able to enjoy their Prom.

Persia sounded stunning, I could see her gracefully descending in her crimson clad dress! Very nice descriptions of her appearence. The triquerta pin was just such a nice touch, I wish they had triquerta themed jewelry on the show, something would like, boost their powers, a family heirloom or something.

Aww... Poor Pam, I just hope that this hostility will fade in time. I think this subplot will be testing her bond with Persia, and maybe getting over her jealousy slightly? I hope so. Haha, I loved the little addition of Prue being in charge of the photography, why she didn't she have a camera in her hand in "Just Harried" I mean, it was Piper and Leo's wedding, I guess the writers screwed up sometimes even back then.

Hmm... Dane seems a little clean cut for my liking, I think he's got something to hide. I'll be keeping a close eye on him... Wait, I just sound like an overprotective parent. Speaking of parents! I loved how Persia called Cole her dad and not stepdad, it's the nice touches like that that show the little growths in a character.

Update soon!

PS: Heh, don't worry about it, and thank you! I like to think I'm hitting my characters emotions dead on! And I'm also glad that I've heightened your opinion on the male species :P

*gives envious eyes at Persia* I wanna go to prom! *stamps foot* Stupid Scotland not having stupid proms until next stupid year! lol! Okay I'm over it.

AWESOME chapter! You never cease to amaze me. Persia's dress sounded beautiful! And when she hugged Cole the hugest grin spread across my face. Then she told Dane Cole was her dad and I nearly squealed! That was so tremendously sweet. I could so clearly picture everything which happened in this chapter. You are a bloody amazing writer Miss Pinky. *bows at feet* lol! I've never been to a prom but my sister had hers last year and you captured the excitement perfectly. And am I sensing resentment from Pam towards her big sis? ooh dear. (I can relate...kinda.) But I'm not wholly convinced by this Dane guy. He seems too good to be true- especially for a Halliwell! Cannot wait to read about the prom. I have no doubt that it will be amazing!

Laur x

I been reading your stories and I think they are great. I could actually see you writing for Charmed. I had to make a comment on this chapter because I loved it. My favorite part was with Paige and Pearl when paige said I know your moves girly I invented them made me laugh so hard I could just see her say that so clearly in my head. Keep up the good work.

Interesting chapter(to say the least)(snickers in corner.)Dude, Duvay is an jack-ass.

"Better than awesome"? Aww, shucks, *gets a red face* Well, I'm just going to have to leave just as good as a review as you left me! I woke up this morning and checked my e-mails, and saw a review that was 4KB! The usual is either one or two! So thank you so much. I don't think I'm going to able to top it lol!

Anyway, onto this chapter! Perfect as always. I loved Darryl giving Andy a hard time. One life IS one too many to have lost, but it's not Andy's fault, nor is it the COs fault, they have to clean up the messes left by the demons who are at fault! Grr! I hope Duvay sticks around for a while, why do I think that you're leading us up to an amazing finale that involves exposure? I certainly hope I'm right, as I love exposure storylines! Heh, for some reason, I could imagine Darryl puncturing that tomato in slow motion in some symbolic way of saying they're screwed. Lol.

Haha! Disipline (sp?) by magic! I love it! And I loved the way you described Pearl's clothes to us. She certainly was ready for a little day out, then she gets tackled by Paige! LMAO! *covers ears* Oh thank God! The tantrum didn't take off, that would have shattered a few windows, not to mention the dresser and TV that may now rest in peace. The line "I know your moves girly, I invented them." had me in stitches! I could just see Paige saying that with an eyebrow cocked and a little smirk!

Ooh, foreshadowing. Something I feel that we're going to be seeing a lot if Duvay's snooping around. So, he's paid off the security warden to keep an eye on Andy and Darryl, huh? Not good, not good at all!

Can I just say I love when you round up a subplot's events into one calmly paced chapter? It's just so nice to know that order has been restored within the Halliwell clan! So... err... let's leave Andy and Prue to make up, shall we? And hopefully bring about the "are destinies set in stone" part from the summary!

Update soon!

PS: I'm a him, not a her. Sorry I didn't call you on it earlier, but I didn't want you to be embarassed :)

awesome chapter! darryl seems a little po'd about yet another unsolved case. i loved the scene between pearl and paige, haha pearl wears baby phat that was an awesome touch as was prue and andy's makeup sex scene. i'm glad you like powers and the past [just got your reviews]. keep updating and i'll keep reviewing!

wow paige was angry!great chapter!

naughty naughty! lol. but i'm glad they FINALLY made up, its been way too long!

my only comment is u kinda made a little error when paige was grounding pearl. u said that paige orbed out with the phone, but when pearl sent the ball at the door and it bounced back, u said that it destroyed the phone.

just a note. luv the story, plz keep going!

Sorry for taking so long to review last time! Lol. Back at school now so I have a LOT of homework! (Damn senior responsibilities!)

Anyway, back to this SPECTACULAR chapter! :D Awesomeness on a stick! DUDE!

Paige punishing Pearl was sheer brilliance! I could imagine Paige mothering like that! I wish the show would see that Paige would make a much better mother than Phoebe (imho at least...heh!). I hate how they see visions of Phoebe's little girl etc. and all we ever find out about Paige is that she's a whitelighter! duh! lol. Oops...I ranted again, didn't I? ...*shifty eyes* Back on track now Laur.

I was so hoping you'd bring back Duvay, and you did! Grin from ear to ear on my face! Darryl and Andy working together is one of my favourite things to read about :) lol!

And well well well, Mr and Mrs Treadau! Tut tut! :p Whenever I end chapters like that it seems to lead to a baby Halliwell, but I dunno what you have planned! lol. I can keep my fingers crossed though :p Until next time. Adure

Laur x

GREAT chapter! LOVED Paige sorting Pearl out! Typical Paige, lol! LOVED the "good day, pearlinda" line lol! Very 'naughty' ending lol! When's Persia's prom gonna be? And is the new friend mentioned in the summary gona be a friend for Phiona? Uh oh, Andy and Darryl are in trouble :S!

The show should have miles and piles more P/L love! They're the best! AND I HATE Brad Kern or whoever the hell decided to cut Leo out for half the season : ! And i agree with you about the 'feels like nobody's updating thing'! But u update more now so that's great and almost enough for me :P

update soon pwease

This was written B-E-A-ootiyfuly! Brandon and Pearl are quite possibly the cutest love story since Piper/Leo! lol. And I mean that in all sincerity. I always look foreward to reading about them and you handle their relationship so awesomely!

I really admire your ability to paint such a vivid picture in my mind of litterally everything you write about! Piper's goosebumps were an awesome touch! And I loved the inclusion of the kids in this chapter. I think you are very talented in your ability to divide focus between characters but seeing all the kids together was awesome! Especially the interaction between Phiona and Prissy! Prissy wa remarkably cute i this chapter! Wanting to show her power to Isis- aww! Cannot wait to read more :)

Laur x