its a good fic
please update soon

Oh, I LOVED it!! I had been searching for Harry/Liz stories but I had missed this one. I'm so glad you told me about it!

It was so sweet. I love the way you describe them, both Liz and Harry. She's scared about Harry's behaviour, but she still cares for him. And Harry... I loved the conversation between him and the Goblin. I agree with the fact of the Goblin thinking Harry's love for Liz is a distraction for his "mission" (I talk about that in my fic! But I haven't translated that chapter to English yet). Fortunately, he got to make a deal with the Goblin to leave him alone... for a while. I would have loved to see what happened next, with Harry telling Liz that he loves her and her reaction. Why didn't you continue it? It was so short...

Anyway, I loved it, as a H/L fan and as fic reader. Why don't you continue it or write more things?

Ps: Sorry again if I make some mistakes.

That was a cute story. Harry is one of my favorite characters and I love to read stories with him in them. I hope you continue!

Intersting. I don't see a lot of Liz stories here.Maybe one or two but this is pretty good though.

that was realy good first chapter i do hope u keep going with this cos all i can find is PP/MJ fic on here and i think Harry should have Liz,plz update soon