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DMHPsasunaru
2009-11-23 . chapter 2
Oh interesting so far! I really like this story and I can't wait for Dash and Danny's realationship to evolve. Loved Danny's makeover.

Who's Spike? Is he an OC or a canon character? It's been so long since I've seen the show that I can't remember if he was in it or not.

I spotted a few typo's; in the last paragraph it should be Danny grabbed his bag rather then his bad. And in the last chapter it's morning rather then mourning. Thought I'd mention them cause typos are really easy to make and since they are words speelchecker didn't catch them.

Any way great chapter and I hope you update soon.
Danny Fenton
2009-09-17 . chapter 2
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY AND ADD LOTS OF LEMON TO IT TOO!
h
2009-09-02 . chapter 1
The moment I read ' blue highlights' I was done. The whole emo/goth card is lame and I know as soon as that shows up, the rest of the story will be riddled with personal influences. How original...
brokenangelwings16
2009-04-30 . chapter 2
plz keep writing plz
Drew101
2009-01-18 . chapter 2
That was great! Can't wait for the next chapter. Any sex at all?
Light
2009-01-15 . chapter 2
So Awesome!
PLS UPDATE SOON!
Kaizerwave King
2008-12-31 . chapter 2
Wow! This is getting better and better. It is great! I hope that you can update and finish it soon. This is too good for you to stop and loose interest now.
Kaizerwave King
2008-12-31 . chapter 1
Wow, this is a good story! Keep it comming!
taylor-996
2008-09-09 . chapter 2
Ahh you have to update! This is a pretty good story so far. Although, you should either get a beta or get a friend to read it over. There were some mistakes but not too too many.
Blood White Panther
2008-09-07 . chapter 2
Not bad at all. There really isn't enough Dash/Danny in the world.

~Panther
RockXBlues4Eva
2008-08-04 . chapter 2
Please update! I think this is cute so far.
Dark Days
2007-11-05 . chapter 2
Cute story xD Danny sounds pretty.
smukase
2007-07-26 . chapter 1
xcuse me i meant 'update' hehe *backs away slowly*
smukase
2007-07-26 . chapter 2
pliz review soon! i hate cliffhangers! (even the movie sucked)
J
2007-07-25 . chapter 2
You can't stop it there!What happens in the janitors closet? Please write more soon
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