 DMHPsasunaru 2009-11-23 . chapter 2Oh interesting so far! I really like this story and I can't wait for Dash and Danny's realationship to evolve. Loved Danny's makeover.
Who's Spike? Is he an OC or a canon character? It's been so long since I've seen the show that I can't remember if he was in it or not.
I spotted a few typo's; in the last paragraph it should be Danny grabbed his bag rather then his bad. And in the last chapter it's morning rather then mourning. Thought I'd mention them cause typos are really easy to make and since they are words speelchecker didn't catch them.
Any way great chapter and I hope you update soon. |
 Danny Fenton 2009-09-17 . chapter 2 PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY AND ADD LOTS OF LEMON TO IT TOO! |
 h 2009-09-02 . chapter 1 The moment I read ' blue highlights' I was done. The whole emo/goth card is lame and I know as soon as that shows up, the rest of the story will be riddled with personal influences. How original... |
 brokenangelwings16 2009-04-30 . chapter 2plz keep writing plz |
 Drew101 2009-01-18 . chapter 2That was great! Can't wait for the next chapter. Any sex at all? |
 Light 2009-01-15 . chapter 2 So Awesome!
PLS UPDATE SOON! |
 Kaizerwave King 2008-12-31 . chapter 2Wow! This is getting better and better. It is great! I hope that you can update and finish it soon. This is too good for you to stop and loose interest now. |
 Kaizerwave King 2008-12-31 . chapter 1Wow, this is a good story! Keep it comming! |
 taylor-996 2008-09-09 . chapter 2Ahh you have to update! This is a pretty good story so far. Although, you should either get a beta or get a friend to read it over. There were some mistakes but not too too many. |
 Blood White Panther 2008-09-07 . chapter 2Not bad at all. There really isn't enough Dash/Danny in the world.
~Panther |
 RockXBlues4Eva 2008-08-04 . chapter 2Please update! I think this is cute so far. |
 Dark Days 2007-11-05 . chapter 2Cute story xD Danny sounds pretty. |
 smukase 2007-07-26 . chapter 1xcuse me i meant 'update' hehe *backs away slowly* |
 smukase 2007-07-26 . chapter 2pliz review soon! i hate cliffhangers! (even the movie sucked) |
 J 2007-07-25 . chapter 2 You can't stop it there!What happens in the janitors closet? Please write more soon |