Oh that was so vivid! Great job, it was beautiful:)
I saw that you were new on Potions on Snitches so I clicked on your profile. You didnt have any stories on there yet so I clicked the link to your ff profile and saw you had this one:)
I'm glad writing is a nice release for you. We all need something that soothes us when we're down.

that was a well written story, i've meant to read your stuff before as you've read and reviewed mine, i'm clad that writing is a channel for you, it works for me as well and is a much better way of relieving stress than the path many people take

Well done!

Lora Helen

Nice writing, very vivid. _ And I'm glad you have an outlet for depression. ;_; I wish I could be as creative as you when I'm feeling down. Great work.

This was really good. I liked it alot and i hope that you continue with it. I'm guessing it's either catharing and quatre OR quatre and trowa. but, definetnly not catharine and trowa, since they are siblings. anyway, i really liked this, and i'm sorry about your situation with your b/f, that would suck. i wouldn't be able to do it. Anyway, please continue.

later,

Robin

Satanira- Oro.

Duo- Stop that.

Satanira- Stop what?

Duo- That.

Satanira- What?

Duo- Stop with the one-word answers and leave your usual babbling review, or I'm unplugging the computer.

Satanira- Waah! Duo's so mean to me! Did you hear that, Q? Duo threatened to unplug my computer! It won't work if it's not plugged in! I just wanted to leave a review for Pilot, and now Duo's bullying me! Waah! *breaks down crying*

Quatre- Duo...

Duo- She was starting to get depressed. You know how she is.

Quatre- Just... Deal with it a different way next time, okay? One that doesn't make her cry?

Duo- Fine.

Satanira- Yay! Q-chan defendeded me! Oh, and as for the pairing... 4C. Quatre/Cathy. My best guess.

Blood where? I want some this is good

Whoa...

That's deep... ouch...

I'm glad it stopped you from being suicidal though! _

Yo, Barton!

I'm so sorry you're feeling down. Too much stress is a bad, bad, thing. And having a long-distance relationship can add to that, too...

Would this be a Catherine/Quatre fic..?

The sentences ran by a bit fast, probably because this was meant as a one-shot, but other than that, I thought it was good, actually...

And yes, I would like it to continue. :)

It would like to know, who the narrator is, and how they will solve this problem, and what kept their loved one from calling.

M.S.

I liked it, very good and entertaining, especially since it is about me. Scared me a bit, but I can get over than and help it by calling every weekend now. I did like how you wrote it, had me on the edge of my seat until the end, when I was relieved of how everything was wrapped up. Very good, and I am not just saying that to get points.

Pretty nice. Catherine paired with - Trowa? Beginning it, "sitting here, watching the rain pour down, I wonder..." would be my preference. This seems as if it is a reaccuring theme within her mind.

Well written! As I was reading, my mouth was open the entire time! It is a beautiful piece, and I am glad that writing takes some of the stress off of you. Hey, if you ever need to talk, you can e-mail me at any time, kay? D I'm here for ya! -wink-

Yes! More! Please? *puppy dog eyes* I wanna know what happens next!