So, I went and checked your profile, because I felt bad for almost flaming your story. I thought you were like, 10-12, and I didn't want to be bullying a little kid.
But now I just think it's sad that a person who passed High School doesn't have these grammatical skills.
"Sturn"? "recieve"? (that one I understand I do that alot).
Spellcheck is there for a reason.
Please use it! :D

WOAH! Dropped the f-bomb from a teacher. Gotta watch that one.
Not only that but from the 'principle' instead of the 'principal'

"...do was curl up into the feeble position ..."
Woah, feeble? I wonder what kind of position that is? You must've meant fetal.
And I didn't know the bully was calling Rikku trash because obviously it was 'Trash Tidus' which shouldn't have been capitalized and it should've had a comma.
Just some tips to help you out later in life.

this is not teh flame but
where is your grammar? And your punctuation? Please edit this story.
And the plot is just like EVERYWHERE. When Tidus asks Rikku out it doesn't even make sense?

Heya! Wonderful story you got here :D I know one way to make it even better, Update! Seroiusly, I can't wait till next chap :D

UPDATE ALREADY!

can u pwetty plwease update?!?!!?!?!?! and if you do update ((which you will)) can you make ur chappies longer?


PLEASE

~*~Martina~*~

Hi, I love your story. Well, anyways, more please!

nice chappie im glad i got you to post it. u better update more cuz i kno ur email now! bwahahahahaha!

~*~Martina~*~

UPDATE THIS RIGHT NOW! lol this is a good story plz update. so many ppl who write tikkus let them die out. u better not b one of them

ke3p Up tH3 GoOD worK

~*~Martina~*~

O UPDATE!

lol good story update! ! ! ! !

HURRY UP & UPDATE! THIS IS SO GOOD!

Hey, nice story! I like it, kinda funny! I like how tidus is the laid-back guy who sometimes can't stand Rikku, and Rikku's the obsessive girl in love with Tidus.

Hey, I liked your fanfic there! It was funny! Reminds me of my high school, which makes it funnier.

I also like the Tikku thing there! I hope you update soon!