 Larissa 2007-09-13 . chapter 1 Hey why'd you stop updating. Me wants more please! Please! Take care and God bless. |
 Rev 2005-04-15 . chapter 1 I really enjoyed this chapter. Maybe J.H influence? hurry up with update. |
 Lioness-Goddess 2005-04-11 . chapter 1*giggle* I know I shouldn't be giggling...but the thought of Leo freaking out over having hair makes me laugh...
anywho, good job, can't wait for more, as always. |
 Sassyblondexoxo 2005-04-11 . chapter 1Hey Gem! Interesting start...intrigued to see where you're going with this! Ready for more!
~SASSY |
 spootycup 2005-04-11 . chapter 1OH NO POOR LEO>> WHAT ABOUT HIS FATHER AND BROTHERS WHAT IS GOING ON> WRITE MORE>> I AM INTRIGUED> |
 Reinbeauchaser 2005-04-11 . chapter 1Very nicely written. So well done that I could feel Leo's confusion and fear.
I like.
More please.
Be blessed. |
 misterfooch 2005-04-10 . chapter 1I thoroughly enjoyed the story and I can;t wait to read the rest. |
 Dierdre 2005-04-10 . chapter 1Very good so far, Gem, well written and quite interesting. I'm looking forward to more! |
 Pi90katana 2005-04-10 . chapter 1O.O Oh, this is awesome! I want more, please!
Okay, so these are dreams, right? So in reality, Leo's still a turtle. Okay, I get it.
Anyways, update soon! |
 pacphys 2005-04-10 . chapter 1Heya Gemdrive!
Have a bad dream? Maybe, but which was the dream? Sounds like he's going to be spending time in the loony bin, or in the doghouse at the very least.
Poor Leo. I like how you wrote him falling off the bed! hehe.
Man, just when you think you know a guy he has to go and wake up all 'ACK! Where am I?'
Ooh, interesting! Great start, even if it is short! Prologues (which this seems to be, maybe) are allowed to be short! hehe
Cheers,
~Pac |