*sniff* *sob* T_T great story!! i liked boone, and they had to go and kill him. it's always gotta be that way, doesn't it? hey, keep writing!

ja, mata ne and wind to thy wings
eclypse

I didn't like it. I mean, there's nothing wrong with your writing. It's a well written fic.

It's just that it's not how I interpret Shannon and Boone's relationship. It's not your fault, you're entitled to your own views and you shouldn't change them! I just think that Shannon and Boone's relationship had more affection to it. The way you wrote Boone doesn't show me that. Reading this fic, you can't see the love he had for his sister. It sounds like he hated her the whole time and was just attracted to her.

I hope this review didn't come off as mean, because I didn't intend it to sound that way. Just some constructive criticism.

Sad but very well written. I liked it.

thats amazing theres alot of detail in your writing, i wish i could write like that! awesome job, i cried when i saw the ep where boone died it was so sad :(

o, ah, *other sighs emit from mouth* i likey that, tis good, tis good