I loved it, it was funny and very cute. Lovely job.

aw cute

Hm. Not bad and I really hated this couple. O.O;; Wow...

Very cute little thingy, I enjoied their flirting.

Wah, I loved it! What a wonderful oneshot. Short and simple and super.

It was really sweet and well written, and the dialogue was so realistic! I could really imagine it happening. The characters were in character, and this fic is so... SUPER!

GREAT JOB! -thumbs up-

That was really good. You have TALENT!

It's about time I find a well-written, in-character Botan-Hiei fic. Suffice to say I enjoyed it thoroughly, and am happy that not all fics of this pairing make me cringe. ^_^ Thank you for the read.

I really liked this story! It was very subtle, which is always wonderful to find, because subtlety is always so under-used.

I also love Hiei/Botan, and this was a spectacularly written example, much better than most of the stuff out there! It was a great treat to stumble onto.

Please write more; I love this so much I don't think I could go on without more!

That was so sweet! I liked it!!

AW! so very very kawaii! XD

aw that was adorable! ^.^ You must write more! I don't care if this was supposed to be a oneshot - I demand that you continue! :P

Very mild and fresh... mm... kawaii! Hope you'll do more Hiei/Botan! I just LOVE those two! Very nice work! Keep it up!

That was fantastic, honestly one of the best I've ever read.

OOc but still sweet. have you nnoticed that romance fics tend to be ooc?

So cute! >.<
are you going to write more?