That was just...wow. Your vocabulary impresses me, first of all. Second of all, just wow. I don't have a word quite elegant enough to explain how much I enjoyed reading this, and I thought everyone remained as in character as possible for fanfiction. I would be proud of this if I were you!!

First I'd like to say that this is a very good story. You portyaed the characters well, including all the confusion, drama, etc. The ending was kinda depressing, though, and I was hoping for some more, you know, action. But it was definitely well done.

However, I would like to point out that you seriously overuse the semicolon. I'd estimate that more than half, maybe eighty percent, of the time a comma would be much better. Kk?

Oh don't stop! This is wonderful, probably the best version of this triangle, and one of the best depictions of Kuwabara I've seen in a long time.
Keep going, great work!
~Chibi

I love your stories, they're so different when compared to others. out of curiosity are you ever going to write any stories about Jin?

Personally, I thought it was a terrible ending even after your explanation. I can understand why you ended it there and this isn't just a blatant flame, but I think what you could have done better to make the ending not... lacking, would be to finish off where Hiei and Yusuke stand. Yes Hiei's pissed at Yusuke now but there's no confrontation between Hiei and Kurama or Hiei's epiphany about what Kurama said when they were in bed about him not being a good friend. This type of story should end when everything is in the light and not just part of it to all of the characters. That's what really felt lacking to me.
Besides that I think you're really good at writing and your detail is amazing with the sketching parts. I really did like the story although the pages are getting kind of long, that's what I like at times, this just doesn't happen to be one of them I suppose.
Also: I'm happy you're not doing a sequel, there would be nothing to write about with Hiei mad at Yusuke, he's not one to forgive that easily. Kurama's just a persuasive bastard.

amazing story though no offense i didnt really get only some of the parts of the story and just some questions who ends up with yusuke? although i think its hiei but i think its both of them and i really like the part of yusuke being an artist i really like to draw too yuyu hakusho of course very good grammer pls keep on writng and could you make a yuyuhakusho fic with yusuke and hiei inlave thanks

wow that was a kind of depressing ending i have to say. But i did like the story!

LOVED IT! I know you don't want any "Write another sequal!" Review so I'll just say this... Keep writing more stories because you're awesome at it! I just can't wait to read more of your stories so keep up the good work or don't. It's all up to you!

OMG! That's all I can say! It's absoulutly amazing! Plus I love the way you look at Keiko. Don't get me wronge I love her character, but I can totally understand why Yusuke feels the way he does about her. Keep up the good work!

w-what! What happened? it can't end there... not when everyone is sad...

(blink,blink) wow. That was a...I cant really tell if it was a good or bad ending...it WAS an ending however. Oh i hope everyone can forgive eachother.

what happened with awake! *cries* i wish u would update

I have to say, any other ending for this fic wouldn't have worked. This was amazing, and I have to say that I understood the message left in your note before you pointed them out. I am truly impressed with your writing, I usually find plenty of plot holes, but I did not find any in your fic. I am still working on that aspect of my own writing, and I believe I will use your story as a learning tool for myself as well as just enjoying it. My favorite parts of the story were anytime you were describing something. I could close my eyes and see what you were picturing. It was amazing to me. Well I believe I have said enough in this review. Great fic. Ja ne!

Thanks for completing this stoy.

I feel bad for Hiei. Lovely story though.