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cinnimonforever4
2009-06-01 . chapter 12
Loved it
Time Vortex
2008-03-26 . chapter 12
Wow, that story was really cute! Especially the last few chapters, I couldn't stop laughing and smiling--it was so adorable!! Very good job. I love the whole thing with the similar pictures! Oh...very good =]
karma11
2007-04-27 . chapter 12
awesome fic
kayceejay-1
2006-11-29 . chapter 12
This is beautifully composed. I know you love reviews, so I'll just add my own two cents in. I love the way you left the ending flexible, as if...if you wanted to, you could stop and let people's imaginations invision the rest. Or, you could continue one day, if you felt like it. Besides the fact that the actually story was so absolutely perfect...I'd say you did a fantastic job. :)
GiGiFanFic
2006-10-01 . chapter 12
How can you do this?? was it s girl,boy or twins or? Great chapter, but 'The End' is a cliffie?You are so cruel. Gigi.
Wolf's scream
2006-10-01 . chapter 12
Heh -- I've heard that little girls tend to be able to wrap their dads around their little fingers... :-) Excellent story; thanks for sharing it!
Julia Holtemore
2006-09-26 . chapter 12
Fantastic finish to a fantastic fic! Kudos to you! Just one question: Was it a boy or a girl? Anyway, great job! I hope all is well with school. Cheers!
Hot0Red0Head
2006-08-12 . chapter 11
love it!!
Wolf's scream
2006-07-27 . chapter 11
Well, you certainly need not beg me...! :-)

I enjoyed reading this chapter; the vignettes from the lives of Lily & the Marauders were very nicely done and rather believable. And "Elizabeth Hope" seems like an excellent name. (Of course, I expect that Ginny will be addressing her as "Elizabeth Hope Potter" from time to time -- most likely when the little one is up to something.) And that little one will, of course, have Harry "wrapped around her little finger" in short order (if that's not yet the case), I expect.

I suppose each story must come to an end some time...

Well done!
GiGiFanFic
2006-07-26 . chapter 11
This chapter was truly awesome. You used words and made them flow like fine poetry. I was so touched by the whole chapter. Thank you so much . Jeanne.
Julia Holtemore
2006-07-25 . chapter 11
No, you don't have to beg for my review! I loved it! Great job! I liked that it was so long! I was enjoying every moment of it. I really like the flashbacks with the marauders, actually. I wish more people would write more fics about when Harry came into James and Lily's lives. This is so awesome! I'm so sad that it's almost over, but I'm sure you;ll leave us with an appropriate ending - an ending that will make me smile and go "aw" but won't make me go "What?! I want more! Give me more!!" At least, I don't think you'll do that. Right?

Well, I'm gonna go now. By the way, I loved the grabbing the hand thing - and the grabbing the nose thing. That happens all the time with little babies and it's so cute!

Cheers!

-Julia Holtemore
Wolf's scream
2006-07-15 . chapter 10
Interesting developments, indeed. But it looks like a reasonably good prognosis, at least so far.

Now, I look forward to seeing Harry's reaction when he opens that envelope...
Julia Holtemore
2006-07-11 . chapter 10
Great Story! Evil Ending! Please update VERY soon. I'm sorry for the sucky review, but I'm SO tired.

Cheers!
lifeisawsome89
2006-06-05 . chapter 9
oh thats so sad but yay harry is a father hehehehe i like it. i loved the first one with all the pov changes it was interesting
CASOCCERCHIC02
2006-06-05 . chapter 9
hey good job update soon
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