Reviews for Playing with the Big Boys

Reviews For: Playing with the Big Boys

Iron Reaver 2007-02-11 ch 3,	abuseThis is one nicely written story...sweet.
FS 2007-02-09 ch 3,	abuseThat was hilarious. Just when I wondered whether Shuichi could be Shiho's brother, Dagron gave me the link to this story. I think it's a very convincing theory you had here. And I liked the funny characterization of Shuichi and Vermouth (despite being a bit shocked at the revelation of their past relationship - Vermouth is old enough to be Shuichi's mother, after all. XD) I'll read the sequel as soon as I can.
Amisha the Elemental Sorcer... 2006-07-16 ch 3,	abuseplease write more
ldrn 2005-08-28 ch 3,	abuseI'm going to agree with everyone else who reviewed this -- it's wonderful. Definately not what I expected from the summary, either... ^_^;;
blossomed-angel 2005-07-19 ch 3,	abuseI'm impressed. That was really fun to read. And the crime had been very well thought out, though I thought that the mother would not be softened so easily. It's a pity that you're not continuing the fic, but... everyone's got their own lives and opinions.
crystal-flame-12290 2005-06-25 ch 3,	abuseIm really enjoying your fic. But Im a little new to Case Closed fics and I have a little problem with the american to Japanese names. But still awesome story!
Fyliwion 2005-05-15 ch 3,	abusegiggles oh wow! that was great... actaully I think Akai Shuichi might be one of the most intresting characters if was shrunk snickers I honestly love the story.. I guess its too much to hope that you'd think of doing a sequel? looks hopefully Story was great tho!
MissKaitou 2005-05-05 ch 1,	abuselike id lots
Schillok 2005-04-24 ch 3,	abuseWhoa... that is a difficult story to read. Difficult if you tried to solve the case before Conan (Oh well, maybe at least before Inspector Sato. And unforunatelly I even failed in that. I didn't know the murder before he/she confessed.) But I really liked it. Your story is great and addicting. If even Shuichi couldn't find out Vermouth's plans - what could they be? What would Conan do if he found out who Shojis "father" is? Does "The End" at the end of this chapter mean that your story is already over and these questions won't be answered? You know pretty much about what happend in the manga. The "FBI VS Black Organistion"-Chapters in which Shuichi shot Gin's Scope is not that old, is it? I just wonder how many readers who didn't know that much actually stopped reading at your spoiler warning. ^_^' BTW: Interesting theory you have about Ai and her relationship with that other character. It sounds impossible at the first moment, but the longer I think about it the less unrealistic it gets... I didn't know Ayumi had a sister (in which chapter in the manga was that mentioned?), though I remember Mitsuhiko having one... On the other hand - I don't know anything about the alternative Detective Conan Universe Icka invented. And in AUs, everything is possible. I really liked this story. Even if it is already finshed.
Clamowamo 2005-04-23 ch 3,	abuseI agree with the two below me. You really are an excellent writer and you've written Akai really well. So continue. I'd love to see what ensues between Sho-chan and his father, and hopefully some little snippets of a six year old having nicotine-fits. ;)
Dagron 2005-04-22 ch 3,	abuseExcellent start! Very intriguing, good characterisation, well written and thought out... ^__^ And to tell the truth, the idea of Vermouth -Mothering- (or, as might be the case, fathering? 6.6;; okay, that sounds wrong XcD) a six year old looking Shuichi Akai is very, Very appealing ^_^ It does indeed look like this is going to be fun... Although with those two, fun sounds dangerous XcD very. You've described Shuichi, a very mysterious and difficult (although appealing) character to write(in my belief), in an extremely realistic andbelievable fashion... And fun ^_^ Go Shoji! Am looking forward to next updates ^^
tdei 2005-04-21 ch 3,	abuseReally enjoying the story. =) I like the plot so far. Looking forward to the next update. ^^
Clamowamo 2005-04-14 ch 2,	abuseI've been wanting to reply to the second chapter, but I haven't really thought of anything to say. I'll try with a generic, "This is great! Keep going!" for now... Because it is really good, you write mysteries very well, and you should keep going.
Yamikaze 2005-04-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis story is very interesting so far. The idea sounds very plausible and the characters are solid. I have read many other fanfics of DC/Case Closed and most of them involve either overused sappy romances, boring angsty thoughts, and/or regular episode-like mysteries. It is very refreshing to see someone create a story that is more involved than the rest out there. One thing that I have to disagree with you is that I don't think that this should be considered AU. Many fanfics out there are downright OOC or strange in a "black pepper on your fruit" kind of way, and yet their authors consider them to be within the norm of the universe the characters exist in. Your story, on the other hand, has given me the impression of a solid base from the actual storyline, and therefore I would have to say the possibility of this story happening in Gosho Aoyama's DC/Case Closed universe is very high.
Clamowamo 2005-04-10 ch 1,	abuseOk, I love this! Your writing is good, I can actually read it without raising an eyebrow at poor word choices and grammar. The plot is quite original as no one EVER uses this character, especially as the main character. (I've read one other fic where he was the main character, and this just happens to be my favorite character in the series.) I'd love it if you'd cover his history with the organization; especially Sherry, Gin, and Vermouth. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

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