Wow. Just wow. I'm in love. ;P seriously though, this was FANTASTIC. the way you wrote this was perfect, especially the humourous bits - you had me laughing out loud. great work!

Even after four years, I still come back to read this a couple times a year. It's like a popcorn novel that's fun to just pick up again at a whim and finish quickly. Just fun to read, and very, very well done.

I would have liked to see some sort of throwdown with Vrook, but after thinking on it, what you had happen fits much better. No reason the arrogant bastard should even have the chance at even a shred of unreserved vindication.

Long review short, I love this story, and have it bookmarked. Hell, I've had it bookmarked since shortly after it was completed. I hope for a sequel sometime, even if it has nothing to do with KOTOR2.

skillage

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This was an awsome fic. You got the characters perfect, especially liked the moment with Canderous commenting on the 'lover's fight'. Completly something he would do. :P You really should write a sequel to this following Reven and Bas into space to deal with the 'unknown' threat.

Hi, well, uh, this story would be great. Except for this one problem. Why do Bastila and Revan like eachother? I don't know, but it bothers me a bit, but don't mind me!

Hey, uh, check out my stories please! Sorry, I need some advertising; not a lot of people read mine! =)

This story was amazing. When I read it, I was amazed. You did such a wonderful job catching the character's personailty, and you made it very real. You did the dramatic parts very well, and there was just enough humor along the way to keep me into the story and not have an overload on drama. There really is nothing for me to complain about. Keep on writting!

After reading it completely. I still stand by my previous obvious statements, but non-canon or not this was still a damn good story. And I enjoyed it.

Keep up the good work.

From the two chapters I've read so far. This is a very VERY well written fic. The only thing I can't put my finger on, is the fact that you made Bastila and Malak brother and sister.

Technicly, if you don't mind me stating the obvious..They wern't related to eachother in any way shape or form. Except via master/apprentice. But don't let me discourage your writing, it's damn good. And it fits togather.

Anyway, keep it up. And I'll finish reading this another time.

I am...breathless.
A beautifully written, in-depth inside into both Revan's and Bastila's emotions.
Actually, I don't like non-canonical stories in general, but the fact that this one focuses on a FemRevan x Bastila relationship in such a wonderful, plausible way just makes me love it.
If only this had been the official KotOR story... :-)

Incredible story. You have just become one of my fav writers.Little rough in some areas, but the story is amazing and professional grade. I look forward to reading your other masterpieces.

This is a excellent story!
Because the leading characters of the story have unterstandable motives to act. Not one of these usual plain stories about FRevan/Bastila.

Have you ever thought about another story for Kotor?

I LOVE IT! Okay, now that I've gotten my insane little exclamation out of the way...I can only revel in awe at your abilities. Have you come into contact with the Force of Writers?! Every writer searches for it, but only some actually find it. This fic left me absolutely enthralled with both the characters as well as your storytelling abilities. I can't ever hope to write just how euphoric reading this made me be. Anyways, I really have to make myself scarce before I scare some poor onlooker with my maniacal grin, but congratulations on anything and everything!

Feck me!
This story is really, really deep and powerful. Not have I read a fanfic as great as this since "Shadow's Kiss".
I mean it, words cannot possibly say how good this fanfic is.
It's so moving.
I LOVE this story!

Now, I'm motivated to actually finish my KotOR fanfic...

This was pretty good, especially for being as short as it is (my usual reading habits are in the 100K length). I really think that was a neat idea for a reason for the war. I can just see the flak the Jedi would be given after the Republic finds out that Revan started the war for the sole reason of the Jedi denying her Bastlia. Especially when combined with the earlier punishment and reasons for it when they were upset with Bastlia for choosing to save 2 lives over the others when they went ahead and denied 2 people at the cost of billions. Anyway, good job on this.