This was a great fic :) Few years ago I read Butterfly's Sleep and I had a feeling that there should be more. And here I am after all these years reading a sequel :D I found your fic by accident but I'm really glad I did :D

Aw . . . this was another awsome fic. It was a little sad that Nakago's gone, but he finally got to be with Soi. I cried a couple of times reading this.

aw . . . ::sniff:: ::sniff::

no! that's awful! poor Nakago!

Yay! Forboding!

oh! that's so sad!

"Shake my hand," I said. "Isn't that what they do in America?"

To my surprise, I saw tears in his eyes.

"Thank you, Amiboshi," he said, as the palm of his hand met mine.

"My name," I said, "is Jeff Cotorro."

aw . . . that was cute.

touching! it's very beautiful..*sniff*sniff*

If Suzaku and Seiryu are a balance, doesn't the death of two seiryus disturb the balance a bit? They're not exactly on equal grounds.
Nice story nonetheless. Could be mistaken for one of the actual plotlines.

There are certain stories that are so unique in content and so well crafted that a person simply cannot stop reading them. Fate, and Butterfly before it, are two of such. Thank you for writing such wonderful stories.

this is such a great story!

please do continue it! u are one fantastic writer.

Kyaa... This isn't done yet! ::snaps her fingers:: Nuts. Well, you're doing a great job, so keep it up!

Oh blast it all to hell. This has to be the WORST place for the story to stop! It was getting so good! I think "Fate" is even better than "Butterfly's Sleep" but then again I like more drama and confrontation. Oh well. Please hurry with the next chapters!

I had read this on your website, and would just like to comment that you have dome a wonderful job on this story. I've put you under my favorite authors long ago, and am extremely glad that I did. You are a magnificant author and deserve praise! Beautiful job! *-*

Wai! ;.; Poor Nakago-sama... And everyone else, for that matter. @.@;