WHAT? STUPID CHARLES! hahahahah I HATE CHARLES. and how could you not have continued. Please please please write more soon. and make it into a happy ending. because i want it to be a happy ending. and charles is such an **. excuse my language. hahahaha.
pretty please ocntinue soon. anyway. yeah. SOON

She's going to accept Charles? WHAT? NO! Haha. lol. i love how you did this from Jacqueline's point of view too. it was so good and omg i can't believe how much i love this. im off to read more and omg i can't wait. hahahaha.
lol. sorry. i just want you to know that i really love it. lol. off to read more.
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AWs hahaha. cute. I love D'Artagnan. Like...ADORE him. hehehehehe. i cant wait to see where you are going to go with this. I like what you have done already. im off to read more. so good job!

nice story

Wow cool love how you wrote it!

Cool story. i just started watching the show. i've only ever seen two episodes though. (the heir is human) and (the cameleon)so i didn't know exactly what was going on, but i've read summaries from the official site. so i decided to find some fanfiction. i like how you took all three characters from the scene and made it from each of their points of view. cool.

That was so cute. I loved it. A very good look into D'artagnan's feelings. Keep writing!