*giggles* Zelos, Zelos... You are so correct... Except for the fact that if Lloyd asked you to stay with him (where it would look like you were following him around like a puppy) you'd do it in an instant.

"You like everyone. I mean, you talk to every girl we meet, and you’ve tried to hit on every member of our party at least once" You know, Zelos, that just might be why Lloyd hasn't really picked up on the fact that you really like him...

Well written! Fun read!

that is so cute! please write more!

Pf... Poor Zelos XD
I honestly pity ANYONE who gets hooked with Lloyd, be it Colette, Zelos, Raine, Sheena... ANYONE XD You have to have patience :p

But yeah, nice fic, I love how you impersonated Zelos^^
The style's nice and the thought witty. Good one^^

oh how the FLIGHTY hath fallen!

i think i just bashed zelos...?

Aww. How the mighty hath fallen. Very very true, and a good story to boot.

Wow, it doesn't look like Zelloyd doesn't really work with you. But then again, when I started reading Zelloyd fics, I was going,"The the hell?" Now, it is impossible for me to think that.

Hmm... maybe you should put a kiss scene in if you ever write anymore.

A+

Hm... the Zelos/Lloyd pairing is a great one with lots of potential but a really hard one to pull off plausibly... (at least in my opinion) The good news is that you seemed to capture some of it's essence. I can see where Zelos/Lloyd might have never really clicked for you... it didn't for a while with me (but now I'm a hopeless fan who finds it the most interesting pairing in the game...)

Anyways, on to the actual fic. First of all, you're Lloyd is absolutely adorable in this story. You write Zelos' POV with such wit that it makes me smile as I read it.

"So here I am, playing a part in one of the most disgusting clichéd scenes that I know of. I pick up another pebble and toss it up at the second story window I was standing underneath, still not getting the attention of the person who was in the room. What made it even more pathetic was that this was my house I was throwing rocks at like a love-sick fool."

Loved this line. Very great. As I said, I love the way you write from Zelos' POV.

However, for maybe a... less good point... I have to say that most people who write Zelos/Lloyd (especially for the first time) take this kind of approach... aka the 'Zelos is in love with Lloyd and is trying to confess his love while Lloyd is totally oblivious.' While we have seen it before, this fic was an enjoyable read. :)

*poke* Hello. I read this but I didn't understand it. Blame it on my stupidity.

Ahh~!! Why does this fic not have a bajillion more reviews?! XD I've been hunting good Zeloyd on FFnet for a while tonight, and yours has really hit the spot. *sighs happily*

Your Zelos is so clean and certain (maybe it's just your writing style), it seems a little strange, but it still seems like him. Of course he'd be serious in this kind of situation... And your Lloyd is so adorable and perfect, he made me squeef.

Thank you so much for writing this. ^_^ *adds to favorites* I'm definately going to browse the rest of your fics as soon as I get a chance!

Aww...

lol ^^ This was cute! And very well written, I might add. ;)

Wow! That's kewl! Go Zelos! I can't wait to see more from you ^^

Nice job writing it out.