I know this review is years overdue, my dear, but I just want you to know that you remain one of my favorite authors of all time! This fic is absolutely fantastic! I miss your IY fics, and I hope there will be more next time. Cheers!

good stuff, but how and where on earth did you learn to write so well? In other words, can I get tips?

once, more, another beautiful fic written by an awesome author. its good. i love these short storys that you type.

Ah, a metaphor fic. I *love* metaphors.

Funny how I've heard for so long how you're a wonderful author, and yet I've never clicked on one of your stories until now. This was just breath-taking. As I'm looking out the window right now, I can almost see a silhouette of Miroku playing in the clouds thanks to your lovely, lovely descriptions.

Thank goodness that there are still fanfiction writers out there today that can actually include words like "ephemerae" and "mercurial" in their fics. While I consider myself to have a vocabulary that far supasses the average FFN author, I had to look quite a few things up. ^^ This sort of disturbed the story's flow, as I had to go back and reread the previous sentence to use the word in context. And ((gasp)) there weren't any careless grammatical errors! Oh, thank you for putting my inner editor at ease!

"He laughs rarely, but to her his laughter is precious, dearer than the life-giving waters of the sky." Ah, so romantic, and very fitting to my favorite IY couple. That ending just made me smile. Wonderful work!

Amazing.. great Sango/Miroku. Very serious and multi-dimensional.

Beautiful :)

Hey there, just going for a spin in my new ff .net account and I have to give more love to this piece. I really think the whole metaphor is wonderful and your use of color is splendid. I'm also a sucker for exploring the dynamic of the Sango/Miroku relationship and I love what you've done with it here.

Aw.. short and sweet!

Very poetic. I like the use of the seemingly random thoughts as well. I know that whenever I think of a person like that, the images I get are rarely, if ever, organized.

Very poetic and pretty. It made me try to think back to the number of times I had seen him laugh in the anime. They are such a sweet couple and you showed that deep love very well.

...see, this just isn't fair. xD How in the WORLD do you write so beautifully? The idea is creative, the words spun together ingeniously, and overall, the effect is just WOW. I envy your talent. Wonderful job. =)

i like ur drabbling. u drabble so beautifully lol. seriously, very nicely written.

Aw, love the Miroku/Sango! ^_^ Very nice imagery and diction--you can really picture the situation. Good work!

Oh, how pretty! Short, refreshing, incredibly sweet, and very well written. I liked it a lot.