Reviews for It's Just a Minor Setback

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Unices 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseLolololololol
too-much-romance 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abuseEto...(also meaning the same thing as Ano)...I can't believe I laughed at all those little itty-bitty ridiculous things. Like "Inner-Inner-Neji". You had to say that twice. “Tenten…” No response. “Tenten.” No response. “Tenten!” Diddly squat. HILARIOUS. It just sounds so funny, because I'm reading it outloud! Hah! Neji said nothing as he stared at her, as Tenten mumbled inaudible things, rubbing her eyes. I can hear the cuteness of it! Yay! Reguvenating. I wish I remembered to use that word. ^^ But then again I haven't used Lee and Gai much in my stories. Maybe I should try writing drabbleish things, instead of making everything so series with research. Make use of the things I already know. Like how stupid Lee sounds on karaoke as he tries to make the words more...formal. And that Neji doesn't have an excuse for his hairstyle because it's not the TRADITIONAL HYUGA style. And how Tenten talke to her weapons like their real, saying, "My, you look SHARP today!" "Oh! CUT it out!" And...yeah. AWESOME.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only 2007-05-01 ch 1,	abuseAw...KAWAI!
B.Q. 2007-03-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseIT WAZ SWET AND FUNNY! a deadly combo... IT WAZ GREAT! I ENJOYED IT! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!
00mightyaddict99 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abusea! LOVE IT SO MUCH IT WAS REALLY CUTE WRITE MORE!
BitterLife 2006-06-21 ch 1,	abuseYEAH THEY KISSED! AW :take in deep breath: AW okay i'll stop AW sorry couldn't resist anyways AW lol i really liked it AW :)
The Wolf Maiden 2006-05-17 ch 1,	abuseThat was so funny I was laughing though out the entire thing. I got spit on my key board cause I was laughing so much. AH, spit bad! (Inner-Inner Lady Awesome:-makes cross with index fingers- DDIE!) I actually think I stopped breathing cause I was laughing so hard. It hurted... I'm perfectly aware that's not a real word
Hanzatsu-Hime 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abuseDIS IS DA BEST NEJxTEN 1SHOT EVA!! I LUVD IT!! IM PRINTIN!! IT RULZ! Keep on ritin! ^_^
... 2006-02-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseermm...ok...first neji says no then neji pulls tenten into a hug and starts making out with her...wow...
Ohohen 2006-02-03 ch 1,	abuseIt's like hm...are you hurt? No. XD Cute story!! =3
TheEndlessSnow 2006-01-18 ch 1,	abuseum...i...liked it? that was wierd but good i just love Gai and lee there are so...wierd...ya...lets go with that.
Kuzosama 2005-12-09 ch 1,	abuseOi! NejiTen Fluff is good, but they would check for any other enemies... =/ They're proffesional ninjas dammit!
Tsunayoshi 2005-11-10 ch 1,	abuseGREAT STORY!
Lyida 2005-10-24 ch 1, anon.	abusehey this is cool but i think you can do beta so that the story can be lonnger!(longer)>.
kuwalla-the-FLAME-alchemist 2005-10-19 ch 1,	abuseYAY!

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