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| Calleigh-star 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseplz don't let this be a oneshot it's too good for being a oneshot |
| FateBinder JeAnne 2006-10-06 ch 1, | abuseO.o What the... Still can't believe it... Between wanna laugh and scream... That baby's gonna be me, hahaha... ^ ^ |
| The Lady Revan 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuseI'm not really familar with the CSI, but I can judge about writting and style anyways, and it's great. Not meaning anything mean, though you had a few spelling errors and I think a gramar error here or there. But on the whole, grat work! ANd you developed your charaters well too. You might consider line breaks at the start and ending of the story/chapter; (whichever one you pefer to call it) I find that it sometimes helps. And thank you for your review, I'm happy I've gotten reviews on the unintentional character of the poem. lol - Lady Revan signing off. |
| Rtisticsoul 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abuseWHOA! PREGNANT! SHOCK! great, very surprising! |
| bigandcarrie 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abuseFabulous. I'm picturing Aiden and Flack's baby. The baby would be adorable. |
| Kavi Leighanna 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abuseWhile I was too busy wrapped up in the sweet plot of this I didn't have a chance to check for spelling errors... Its a tiny thing and the plot is so much more important. Awesome job! |
| Rose Ruru 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI reviewed this story on Talk CSI, but I think it's worth to tell you again that this story is adorable, and I love it! Keep writing more F/A fics 'cause we need them! =) |