THE LAST LINE.

I really liked this one.

Your preception of Kakashi is heart wrenching.

wow i never thought of something like that, its so sad all that kakashi's gone through :sobs:

That was awesome, I loved reading that. Yet another interesting take on Rin's death, among other things.

The fact that Kakashi has summoning dogs makes sense in the theory that Rin is an Inuzuka (besides the markings on her face.) Good angst.

Awe...poor Kakashi...that's so sad...

Nice... but a little rough on the edges. Perhaps it is merely my spacing preferences though. Inuzuka? Doubt that Rin is related to Kiba...

I'm confuzzled...who's the fifth? but i really like ur writing style

very deep, i like it. _ Great job. the story's going on my faves

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Oh dear lord, that was depressing. Really good, but very depressing. I love the way you write, the style. I couldn't point out to you what it is, but there's something there that other people don't have. Great job!

Very sad, but pretty good :) You did a great job in one-shot, I love it. Keep up the good work!

Nicely done. The piece is well-structured and flows quite well. D

well, you are skillful, not only at giving me disturbing images but at many other types of writing as well. I shall favorite this so I can keep track of you, and come back for your FMA once I've seen that series.

Oh my god. I'm shacking. That's so sad, I love it! But you said some of it was a spolier, so what parts are the spolier. I'm seriously shacking right now. I'm about to cry, now I'm crying. This is just so cool and about Kakashi. I love him and this. Its just beautiful.I'm sorry this is the strangest thing to ask of you but could you read mine and review. I don't care if you hate mine. Its my first one. Damn I..can't stop..crying..Kakashi-kun...sad...loves it...

well oni-onigiri says good-bye