That... was so awesome. I love it! I mean... the individual sections could've been longer and more... descriptive, but it was still totally awesome!

I was attracted to read this fic becaues of the title and summary, by the way.

Well... okay, you were missing some punctuation marks... and the dashes sometimes got stuck to the next/last lines... but yeah... Still good.

The idea of Rin being an Inuzuka, and Kakashi using those dogs and all is very interesting. I never would've thought of that.

Poor Kakashi. Feeling like he stole not once, but two times from his deceased teammates (as the died).

...I like the way you handled Rin's death...

aw...how sad! this is a really great! poor kakashi! wa *runs away crying*

Short, but offers some good insight on Kakashi's thoughts on the people who appeared to be the most important to him.