pretty good but there should be another chapter

Hey good stuff, sis. You do the angst real well. *hee hee* I'll consult with you for tips when I get further in my story. Send me your stories before you post and I'll give you some grammer assistance. *smack* Hey! Ya didn't have to hit me, I'm just tryin' to help... *wink*

loved it I hope you write more

magnificant. the only word i have for you today. i look forward to more of the same soon

i really liked this story but i believe that jesse and lexa should be a couple but that just me so...