Intense. Super Intense.

This is perhaps the first fic that led me to ship Emma/Betsy.

I loved how in-depth you went when it came to detail. You had me on the edge of my seat for more than a few chapters, so when it finally reached the end, it was like I could breathe freely again. The tension you're able to evoke from a reader is just absolutely amazing, and I was glad that I was there for the ride!

I'm still a bit saddened that my favorite character Tessa/Sage didn't get the ending that I felt she deserved. Even if she were on the opposing side, I almost wanted her to see her victorious and free. Then again, she also went up against Mystique, who is also one of my favorites. Choosing a winner from that type of fight was difficult all the way through. Still, no matter who would've won, I probably wouldn't have been too happy to begin with. I'm still hoping that you'll continue one day with the sequel of this.

I'm not sure if you still write fics anymore, but you're still one of my favorite authors from the X-Men fandom. It was an absolute honor to read your work.

This was incredible! I've just read it in pretty much one go and I was amazed by the detailed plot and characterisation. Whilst I'm unfamiliar with some of the characters, your portrayal of them made me love them as much as I did the ones I knew.

This is easily one of my favourite fanfics of all time!

It's a really good story so far. I'm surprised i didn't read it sooner. Update Parity shift! Please!

I want to thank you for writing that is was awsome. Very well writen:)

LMFAO oh my god this chapter is so funny:) i bout wet myself hehe awsome job now onto the nxt chapter

Wow! I basically love you for writing this :) Haha...great job!

Nicce. My hands got cramped so I have decided not to review every chapter till they get uncramped. . -glares at hands- I LOVE ever single CHAPTER! Nesh n.n yours and the Emma/Jean I keep reading are among my deffinate top 3 X-Men fics! n.n

You're an awesome writer! Keep it up cos ya know... your f'n awesome!

blky the helraising dragon n.n

Oh! See that! I get sidetracked by an Emma/Jean fic and completely forget about yours. Bad me. Anywho. Nice 9th chapter, specially the nice conversation... fit well with Malchik Gay at the pace I was reading it and listenin' the la songy.

Kudos

blky the helraising dragon

cool! loved this fic till the end! going to read the sequel now!

aww man, and just like that tessa gone? i like her! evil, yes but still damn cool and calcualating! got to admire that in a person seking revenge

O...an insight into tessa mind...cant denied that she got reason to do everything she do. and what a plan it was! cool!

cool! the bashing of the professor was...great! i dislike him, dunno why i used to like him...tessa definately had some great idea for him? and why the heck did she not pull those pair of pistols earlier?

hilarious moments, too many, but i cant say that a bad thing! always like emma! must be cos i been reading too much of princess alexandria fics...still i love your fic!

OH! Nice nice nice. Liked the bit with the whole secret investigation thing in Xavier's office.

oh might as well make it short and go onto the next chapter :P

blacky the hell raising dragon (a.k.a blkdrgnmstr)