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smalls 3/8/01 . chapter 1
nice
Terrasina Dragonwagon 10/22/00 . chapter 1
finish the story! im really enjoying it...
Cho Chang 8/2/00 . chapter 1
Hey

good stuff
Jun Motomiya 5/12/00 . chapter 1
better than the last one, please continue.
Jun Motomiya 5/12/00 . chapter 1
how did she get accepted in her fifth year? don't you have to start at year one?
WeasleyTwinsFan 5/12/00 . chapter 1
I kinda thought this girl was like me and she is!
reader 5/12/00 . chapter 1
ooh, morreee! more?
EmyMcGonagall 5/3/00 . chapter 1
pretty good,watch the format,new person speaking means new paragraph.Keep going!
Firenzie 5/3/00 . chapter 1
This is all right. Ashlie is spelled weird. This is good, but one thing: PARAGRAPHS! Probably a txt. file huh? Happens to me all the time. But wait, how long will this be? I hate searching for pieces, and cliffhangers, and...oh never mind. Oh yeah, can there be some romance in this loooooooong series?
reader 5/3/00 . chapter 1
make her try on the sorting hat, and be in gryffindor. please? i don't like it when cool peeps are put in slytherin.
avali 5/3/00 . chapter 1
well, very interesting. i liked it
lavender 5/3/00 . chapter 1
neat, whens the next one coming out?
Harry Potter Luver 5/3/00 . chapter 1
Great start but did you know that you said Harry and gave George's description and said George but gave Harry's description? Just wondering if that was an accident or on purpose! Great start.
WeasleyTwinsFan 5/3/00 . chapter 1
Ashlie...where have I heard that name before? LOL! I feel so special. Hon, you've got to write more on this. PLEASE! I like this idea- George and Fred forever!
Nemo 5/3/00 . chapter 1
The Station is called King's Cross.
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