Good story. Glad I found it and I like your vision of the afterlife. Would like to see you finish this one.

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Comments - I love it! I think your depiction of the after life was great, specially the part about life being like going to school or work and death being like coming home at the end of the day...Good length, but I wonder if the fic is finished...Good spelling and grammer, it was easy to read...Great fic!

I BEG OF YOU MORE!

I know that you have not written anything else on this story for a while but I jsut wanted to let you know that it makes me feel quite a lot of things and nothing that I can really put my finger on and name. Also I am listneing to May it Be by Enya from the Lord of The Rings soundtrack and it fits well with your story. I wish that you would update this story of if not here just e-mail me the rest of it.

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Thanks

Heidi

You have to finish this story, it's so sweet and so sad. Hurry and finish it please.

This is very interesting. Please, please continue.

Oh, you MUST continue! :)

Aww. . .write more please? pretty please wif sugar and prinkles on top?

WHATHAPPENSNEXT WHATHAPPENSNEXT WHATHAPPENSNEXT IGOTTAKNOW!

Is there going to be more?