 R.I.P. Jake AmaraMichelle 11/9/10 . chapter 7So amazing! Please write more! |
 Anonymous 5/17/09 . chapter 1 OMG! I love it! You just have to finish it! i am also a writer and I know a good story when I read one and I definetley want you to finish this story.
Ideas: Make a happy ending maybe to where Romeo and Juliette are talking about how much they love each other and how sorry they feel that their parents dont want them to be together and maybe while they're talking both their parents just so happen to be listening. |
 Not-telling 10/4/03 . chapter 3 Don't read this if you're not up to a flame.
I have to say that I HATE this story with a passion. You took the beautiful work of Shakespeare and turned it into a darn spanish soap opera! They're all wayy out of character, and what is up with the plot? Romeo and Juliet at the senior prom? Come on! Besides, your story desperately needs description, and I'm sorry but the whole thing is lame.
Change the names and try it on fictionpress.net. But don't put it here. It's mockery.
That's all I have to say. |
 Mary 2/19/03 . chapter 7 OMG! I LOVE your story! Please continue! PLEASE! |
 THC1 3/29/02 . chapter 7 Ideas?...Adding Mercurito would be nice, and some conflict...and pleazze make Romeo and Juliet end up together at the end with a happy ending! Maybe a little Lemon-y(NC-17ish) content too...But so far, I love the ficcy! |
 HyperRoxyChic 3/15/02 . chapter 7 Hey Hey Hey! u gotta write summore! PLEAZ! PLEAZ! |
 Ke Malfoy 3/8/02 . chapter 7Hullo! I'm loving your characters, and Juliette is the nicest girl ever! _
And puh-lease, don't give them a sad ending. I mean... you can give them something sad, but don't kill them and after the sad-thing, put them together again! yay! |
 Stardust 2/12/02 . chapter 7 I love this but please, no sad ending. Make it really happy! Please get the next part up soon |
 Silent-blood 1/28/02 . chapter 6Hey,
I love it i hope you keep on going when i firt read it i laughed so hard.Is romeo and juliett is suppose to fall in love?well i cant wait to find out what happens in the ending.Keep writting and hope to see your book out in the libary soon,your a great writer!I'm your #1 fan!(i'll write more but im in school but i'll write more when i read more)bye
your #1 fan
Tasheka |
 Asagao 11/21/01 . chapter 7 ...Awwwwwwww! *sigh* ok ok I know I am too much of a Shakespeare/romance fan and I love this fic! A little question though... does it really happen that fast? (sorry I have to sigh again that is sooo cute!) If I didn't know better I would've said I wrote that myself! b/c that is exactly something I would've written lol I like that a lot! (shutting up in 5... 4...) |
 Slim Gohan 9/7/01 . chapter 7 I like it, always a fan of Romeo and Juliet. It's good, but where's Mercutio? He rules! You got to add him! |
 Moony Girl 6/14/01 . chapter 7Sounds good! From the new chapters, it sounds like your story might eventually take on the traditional plot...anyway, keep up he good work (btw: you're right, Mercution and Benvolio are Romeo's friends, but also remember that Benvolio is also his [Romeo's] cousin _) |
 Bird Brain 6/12/01 . chapter 7GREAT! i finally finished it! but it was good! keep writing! |
 Bird Brain 6/8/01 . chapter 5great so far! BUT IS "HELLO ROMEO" SOPOSSED TO BE THE ALTERNATIVE TO "hELLO DOLLY?" just curious. |
 Kaylyn D 5/29/01 . chapter 7 hey! kick ass story! keep writin it please.. it's killin me not to know the ending! |