"Generally that is merely a poetic way of saying that a bomb exploded and all hell broke loose. As it is, gunpowder is only known in the lands to the far, far, far, far, far, far, far, far, far, far, far, far, far, far, far, far East (or maybe just West) and they only use it for making pretty pictures in the sky and can’t possibly see it as a method of warfare and killing people, which coincidentally, are both the same thing. Also, hell couldn’t break loose because they, being the trio in the hallway, were already in it. Instead, in this sense the phrase “the world erupted into flame” should not be taken in the poetic sense. Rather, an eruption of flame, albeit a small one, did, in fact, take place."

That entire paragraph was poetic. L.O.L.

Great story. Really exciting and very funny. Keep writing!

ha ha very... uh... funny. By the way, I'm new to this and don't get how u can post things on this site. How do u enter a document?

-The stared daggers at Rill and Riley; the former ducked and the later preformed some sort of pirouette that seemed anatomically impossible.-

It IS kind of hard to imagine a unicorn doing a pirouette. ...Actually...

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Nope. Still can't.

Again you amaze me, but this time with your shameless treatment of Riley and Rill. And the English language. Don't worry, it's a compliment.

...Says the girl who once had her favorite guitarist hit by a van for comedic purposes.

Haha-"Synnamyn!" "Ryley!"

Very odd, but very random and funny.

coolness. I liked it alot. VERY funny on some parts there! LOL

semingly funny so far, its great 2 c someone doing this from the opposite side. i quite like it a lot actually and u should continue it!_ oh and so far riley is the best!

Heh, heh, that's funny. I'm used to people who write fanfics when their hyper, so I don't mind.

*Jane-Bri*

lol that's funny but it doesn't really make sense

thats pretty funny lol.