This story is coll and funny, but a few things seem out of place. First would be that Zuko wouldn't normally let prisoners like the Avatar roam free on his ship, Byakko and Aang and everyone else shouldn't even fathom the fact of submarines. Well, other than that this story is pretty good, I say keep going!

very funny-nice characters. a joy to read.

"Later...after everyone is MIRACULASLY smuggled on board the ship and has been introducted and Zuko RANDOMLY finds everyone and herds everyone but Otenba to a room with a veiw of the deck and Uncle Iroh joins them."
...So what I wanna know is how come Zuko doesn't get into character and do something except stand there and take it all like a baby?

Goodness, please put the canon characters INTO their character! By this point, Zuko would have probably thrown everyone except the avatar over the ship.
Stop writing the characters OOC. Please. You can do better than this...hopefully.

I got an update email saying chapter 5 was up but it isn't! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Mina

Right now I'm crying from laughing to hard! I LOVE it when people are mean to Zuko! Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to go read the next chapter!

Mina

LOL! UPDATE SOON! OR ELSE EDUARDO WILL COME! MUAHHAhHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Omg i lurve ur story!^-^! pls hurry w/ an update!

OMFG its so fricken funny. Please update soon. *begging and doing the puppy-dog-pout* Pwease.

Otenbu so reminds me of Sun Shang Xiang from Dynasty Warriors except for the cheerleading thing...BUT THAT WAS FRICKEN FUNNY!

hehe

LOL! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! PLEASE UPDATE OR SUFFER THE CONCEQUENSES! ...SUGAR IS AWESOME! HEHEHEHEHEHE! *spins around on comp chair* WE!
UPDATE SOON!

from, Goddess of Crazy Fanfics,
blackened-fire

OMG!! I couldn't stop laughing I was literally choking and seeing the light.

PLease continue, this story is so funny, I hope the next was is ike it.

*Makes shifty looks for Zuko* "Good he didn't catch me that time." *"Eh, wrong."*

"Quite following me around!"

This is ** funny. Wierd, But funny.

*laugh histericly*

LOL! I like this story! Ish so funny! :P Write nore soon! This is a defintion of humor! Ciao! :P

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OMG im going crazy. its so funny i love it!