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jimmy-barnes-13
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
This was fan-flippin-tastic! It was very nicely done, brilliant in fact :)!
lastcrazyhorn
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
That's the way Harry! *whoops*
Lord Sia
2008-10-04 . chapter 1
Ha, I can see the potential to work something out here... No "Flight of Death" crap, call him... Mr Black... (Reference to "Make a Wish", best Evvah!)
slytheringirlandproud
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! it's effing brilliant!
snowwhitequeen97
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
u hav made my day perfect! i hate dumbledore, and just imagining 50 dementors suckin out his soul! i can only dream of that happenin. sigh.
AmetheSecond
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
OMG! I just found this fic and it was so good! I must go read your profile, hopefully there's more! I'd love to see Harry laughing his ass off as Dumbles soul is surrounded. Great one shot!
Alorkin
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
Very very nicely done! I have always thought Dumblemort is a manipulative, lying, deceitful bastard and should be flayed. He came out during book sux, episode one, when he turned on the 'regretful grandfather #3 when Harry was unable to do that which hehimself had failed. Getting Slughore to supply theinformation on the horcruxes. "I must say I a very disappointed with you. we desperately need thins information. I expect you to do better. (Para)

His placing Harry with the Dursleys was nothing more than early training for a suicide mission. Just like Kurt Russel's character in the movie 'Soldier'.

Harry is now out of his control, and judging by what he wrote, he's going to make Voldemort look like Betty Crocker. (PLot bunny!)

Should you decide to make a second chapter for this, I have placed it on my 'alerts' list. Alorkin
tess
2007-08-05 . chapter 1
Damn! he means some bussiness!!
Faia Sakura
2007-07-29 . chapter 1
Sweet!
riaaha
2007-05-20 . chapter 1
I would just like to say that this story is one of the best short storys that I have read it. I believe that it has the potiential to be a very good story if it was expanded a little. A manalative Dunbeldore is my favorite and this story has the potentital to be great. Thank you for writing it.
Robin Moto
2007-05-08 . chapter 1
Well that was an interesting piece. Harry Potter going dark might be a fairly common subject, but you've given it your own little twist.
Karen
2007-04-04 . chapter 1
There are so many things changing with Harry I think you could make this into a multi-chapter fic. Draw out the tension (and the torture of manipulative Dumbledore) a bit more.
Von
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
Ohh. Powerful.

Very nice!

I normally stay away from Harry-gone-dark fics, because he seems to always be written as a whiny weakling trying to 'get back' at everyone. And half the time, his 'evilness' is unimaginative and uninspired.

If they were half as promising as YOUR Dark-Harry is, I'd be a happy chappy!
Kitroku
2006-02-24 . chapter 1
Voldemort = garden gnome? *dies laughing* Awsome fic.
koki
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
thank you thank you,
I hate Dumbledore and in this i think he got what he deserved.
And Harry being a bad-ass, great.

Two thumbs up.
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