Ah, your drabble managed to remind me of Fafner's sad ending...and much like the series, your drabble is pretty much unresolved. Why has Soushi returned (or manage to erturn as himself?)Why does Kazuki believe that Soushi is still here?

Thanks for the drabble. It's so difficult to find Fafner stories on FF net

Oh...OUCH. It was beautiful--so, so well-written and beautiful, but... OUCH. ;__; Just four words, but that ending line packs a punch... =__=;; This is a very nice look at the unhappy possibility that Soushi may not come back (or will come back too late @__@), and the rather emotionally-dependent Kazu-chan will just marry Maya, who has been a faithful and dependable friend since the horrible days of the war, ne? *sigh* It's such a real possibility, so I beg Xebec to bring Soushi home quickly...!!

And I've gotta say--it hurt so much that Soushi didn't go stop the wedding, but it was right. ;__; Poor Sou-chan... ::runs off to read SouKazu fluff::

the descriptions you chose and the way you write is amazing!! i hope you write more soukazu fics!

Wow, this is very impressive. Lovely, evocative writing, and it's just the right length. ^^

NO Soushi~ come baack~ Kazuki is still waiting~

(...wait, did I get this right?)

Beautifully written. I like the brief dialogue. The short descriptions nicely adds to Soushi's confused perspective too.