Reviews for Saturn's Guardians

Reviews For: Saturn's Guardians - Reviews: Page 1 of 9

doomedfighter 2008-10-03 ch 4, anon.	abusegreat story hope you continue it due to it being a great piece of work
mythicalprogrammer 2008-04-07 ch 4,	abuseI wish you would update this fanfiction. It's very interesting so far. There are so very few RanmaXRanko fanfiction out there. It was a good read.
SilentHypoCrit 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuseWow that was...not really good...at least the first chapter that I managed to read...maybe it got better later on but the way you set things up was just...boring. I mean the Idea it self sounded really interesting, but instead of taking the time to slowly explore the consequences and especially hardships of this constellation...it all just fell into place without much hassle and too many Deus Ex Machnias (even though Saturn is a Kami of some sort) But just too many too too good circumstances. Also introducing the actual Greek/romanc Goods as really powerfull entitys (I mean spliting a Jusenkyo curse, creating IDs and having money at the ready, all withing 24 hours - this dude has some serious Influence) without consequences for the Senshi. Not good. Sounds like: "Hey I am an all powerfull Avatar of my Planet, so all the Senshi must have one too, but they are they kind of overlooked us all the time because we were not that important and could not have changed things or at least advised them before." In contrast to that all the too fast accepting of the Ranma of Sakura and Motherly duties...and all...is just boring and ooc. Sorry, but this could have been much better.
hagancameron 2007-11-18 ch 4,	abuseI am liking the fanfiction sofar. There are some minor things like leaving out words here and there, but overall very well done. I hope that there will be more in the future as i wait and wander what will happen next.
April 2007-10-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat Story, Please continue it. If you need help I'll try to beta it for you (I would only be able to do it on Saturdays or sundays though due to school)
James Birdsong 2007-06-26 ch 4, anon.	abuseQuite awesome
James Birdsong 2007-06-26 ch 3, anon.	abusePretty good
James Birdsong 2007-06-26 ch 2, anon.	abuseAwesome
James Birdsong 2007-06-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseExcellent
Adeptis 2007-05-10 ch 4,	abuseInteresting story, its just that the conversations seem a bit choppy =/
DMage96 2007-04-25 ch 4, anon.	abuseyo, how ya doin. love the story and concept. i hope you could think about adding another chapter. hope you doin well. lol ^_^
Hibemena 2007-04-09 ch 2, anon.	abusethis is the biggest pile of crap... sorry just the grammar and spelling and how you wrote Saturn's situation and Ranma finding her was just crap. I mean you could of had a beta reader go through it and made it at least a little comprehensible. This fic reads like... "this hapened... then this and... then this and that and this... like something really boring that doesn't make any sense except to people who can read your mind and guess at what's happening. To make this not read like a 5 year old wrote it you need to expand on what's going on. But I love SailorMoon/Ranma fanfic so I'm going to finish reading the whole thing...
Vilkath 2007-04-03 ch 4,	abuseNice concept, Ranma and his girl half being Knights/protectors of Saturn. Thus avoiding the silly fuku's. It also makes some sense, that the moons of a planet could give power to body guards/protectors of the planets Senshi. Beyond the obvious flaw in the system of the Earths moon, which just makes no sense no matter how you look at it. Also liked the idea of some one else being Hotoru's parents after her rebirth. I've always felt the outers were sort of bad parents, little experience and some what cruel. Of all the senshi more then willing to kill Saturn off if Pluto asked for it, and she would if she saw her as a real threat. Beyond growing up with some the only senshi who would actualy kill her, threat or not. The outers are not exactly the most warm and emotionaly sound pair of people, and Pluto is all but dead inside for the most part. Harldy role model material. Overall I liked the idea, and a lot of the details. The end product falls threw a bit though, plot points are a bit rushed, and just about all the conversations are forced heavily. You mentioned a rewrite to try fix this in several chapters but I guess you never got around to it. Many of the characters personalty's seem a bit fixed, and some what exagerated. Akane is bad, but some how I don't think even she could blame Ranma for Ryoga's pig curse. Eventualy maybe for not telling her, but first instict would be to bash him, and maybe her father. Then ofcourse.. Ranma. Most what he does and says, needed to be said. But some how the path from point A to point B, seems to just to fast and dirrect. He comes up with all the right answers, does all the correct things to move on with his life. Even decides tell akane about P-chan finaly. Not that it matters to much since it seems like this fic is almost dead. But like always I hope this fic, and maybe my comments will inspire other writers, we all strive for that elusive good fuku fic=p
New lord of darkness 2007-03-17 ch 4,	abuseNice story. and i cant wait untill Ranma and Sakura meet with Neptune, Pluot and Uranus. Let the games begin
Karuma Kinsei 2007-01-05 ch 4,	abuseNice story.

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