Okay. One word for this. AW! ^^

So cute...I'm such a sucker for puppyshipping...><

AH! DAMN THAT WOMAN FOR HURTING JOU! -shakes a fist at her- Meany woman...I hate her! Good Seto, putting the woman in place...-pats his back- Now I love him even more! ^^ Aw, and Mokuba is just so cute in this one as well...-sighs dreamily-

-ahem- Yeah. So, I loved this story. ^^ Thanks for writing such awesomeness for us to read! ^^ This will go to my favorite list! -clicks-

-The Blonde Midget

this is so funny continue please! i wanna see what happens! i'll give you a muffin? thankies for listening!

very nice

Hmm, not bad, not bad at all, update, it's interesting.
And by the way, do you remember reading "Living Hell"?
I am writting the new version now, it's more compleet, better and less confusing, so, give a try and read it and tell me what you think about it, it's: "Past, Present and Future"
And you're doing really a great job and continue!

O! You should definatly continue! And good grammar, haven't seen it being used as proper as you have used it in quite awhile now.

Continue? Yes, indeed you should! It's very cute so far and I can't wait to see more!

damn its heaps good. nope dont leave it as a one shot no way. i so wanna see what happens. plz update soon k
love ya huni,
jak4snape

gahgahgah, I've been on a massive SetoJou binge and I would just like to tell you this is the best I've read in awhile! Great fic!

This can't be a one-shot, it's too sweet! Please don't leave it like this, I really want to see Seto and Jou get together. Please?
P.S. You've got good writing skills.

Great story, I think you should continue, but the story would be able to stand on its own if you didn't. I loved Moukba's line of "No, I’m observant" that really had me. It fits the situation so well.

You did a wonderful job and I'm really looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future, whether your decide to continue this piece or not. *grins* I really liked how you described the characters and the whole flow of the plot. *grins* *waves*

Icy

Either way if you continue or not the story was great! I like continious stories personally but it's you call. Ja!

please do continue. your story is way too awesome to stop!

I would be content if this were to be left as a one-shot, but I am also interested on your take of things of what would happen next. The characters appear vibrant in their own right, and the sequencing of things flow like a river. This was a lovely read, and I can't help but wonder what happens next.
-KT

Uh.. DUH you need to continue!! I think you should have more S/J action in the next chapter though. Like what happens when they play ^^
toodles,
LRD

You will continue this, right? I loved it! It was well written, gramatically correct, and really in character throughout! Great job :)