Wonderfully written. That spiritual/emotional stuff is great fun to read.

great fic i like the quote :D

Im sitting here in my office listening to "No Good Deed" thinking how F-ing ironic this is, then I come upon your story.Very ironic and I love the actaul concept of it all. Him(by him I am of course refering to Fiyero)thinking of Elphaba last in his thoughts even while being basicly unconsous(sp). I cant tell you in words how much I love this story.

Wow, so sad. Candace, why do you have to make it so sad. I think I like the musical ending instead. But great job.

Please move this to the Wicked category. We're trying to get more fics in there. And that's where this belongs anyway. :-)

I can't believe I missed this - great job, once again!

What really struck me was the irony of Fiyero dying before gaining Elphaba's forgiveness, when she would spend the next fifteen or so years desperately trying to gain Sarima's, then ultimately die, like Fiyero, without forgiveness. It really puts a different slant on things.

I really like the style, too - closely reminiscent of Mr. Maguire's, but I see a lot of your own in there, too. I love it, and it works especially well for this piece.

I didn't find it confusing at all, btw. And as for the abruptness - Fiyero's death was abrupt, yes? I didn't even notice it until you mentioned it (and then I had to re-read three times), but looking back, I think it was a better way to go. The tie-in to the quote was also well done. Lovely job! (Hope you aren't annoyed by long reviews... :) )

I really liked it. It sounds almost as if it could've come from the pen of Gregory Maguire. It's exciting to me that you've read the book...I'm sick of reading fanfics based purely on the musical since i love the book so much more! And what an interesting part to write about! That part was always such a mystery to me...So you're still in highschool, eh? Good luck with AP testing and keep writing, you've got what it takes.

Whoa... great! Love the quote

My poor Yero! Of course I forgive you! Great fic! Please write more soon!

Lovely. You have a beautiful writing style. I especially loved this part, "But aren’t you not supposed to feel things in dreams? Or is it only in dreams that you truly feel, isn’t it the real world that saps you of emotion and feeling?"
Very nice. The end was so sweet and sad. Nice work; I loved this.
Tinkerbell

wow that was good. very intresting to think of HIM asking for forgivness from HER...if that made sence. the part end was so sweet (aw)
great job!

this was really descriptive. i'm being beaten up. ow! no wait, its Fiyero. lol. no, but it's so sad. the only thing i would say about this is that, i don't know if he's like this way in the book, but Fiyero seems a little selfish. he wants to keep her all to himself and wants her to go wherever he goes. maybe its just me and my uneducated Wicked'ness' talking but that's the ways it seems to be. otherwise, a very enjoyably excellent, superb, fantastic, etc. read (cuz i couldn't think of any more words) :)

Oh oh oh. *flutters hands in an overflowing of emotion* I love that he thinks about the implications to her - because little does he know the extent that this will tear her apart. And he wants her forgiveness, of course he does, he could never stand to have wronged her... and then she goes and tries to gain the forgiveness of his wife. It's a tragic bloody circle, it is. And that last line was so sweet. I love just how nice Fiyero is, and how honestly and truly dedicated to her he was. Even if he had a hard time understanding it.