| Reviews for: Unseen Company - Page 1 of 2 |
 Trumpet-Geek 2/8/06 . chapter 1It's a cute story. Keep up the good work! |
 Lost Child From Heaven 1/11/06 . chapter 1what is with this story it is just wierd i mean it has to have clffies and romance and all that gusshy stuff
lol ... i guess i'm a sucker for those stories all you need to do is update OK! |
 ChildlikeEmpress 12/20/05 . chapter 1that's a cool story, about your friend's sister. and the fic was sweet, great job! |
 Samara-chan 12/19/05 . chapter 1That was SO cute! Haha... the thing with Haku scowling was funny xD Aw man this was sweet. The story at the end sufficiently creeped me out though, lol. |
 Darkpanther 12/15/05 . chapter 1 So cute. Loved the part when Chihiro finally got to see her friends again. I hope you finish your story soon.
Score:A |
 Veritas Found 8/13/05 . chapter 1Lol, that's kind of creepy what happened to your friend's sister.
This was sweet, though. Well, bittersweet would prob'ly be a better term (reunited, but Chi will prob'ly never be able to be with Kohaku), but it was still good - I loved it! Great style, y I love Eiko. I can tell I'm still on a HP fix, 'cause I kept thinking whenever she talked, "Woah...she's like Lovegood!" XD 'Nyway, great fic! |
 Aime Atem Itsumo 7/5/05 . chapter 1This story was awesome! |
 xXxArcoRainbowYanagi-SamaxXx 6/4/05 . chapter 1no don't end it like that you should wright more and spice up the story |
 bLuELuN 5/9/05 . chapter 1 Whe! *singsong* Rabid Lola finally knows who I am! XD *sits on your humped back while reading to you this review*:
THIS FIC IS TOO SHORT! Is that all Spirited Away inspired you to write? Okie, okie, I must admit, I’m kinda guilty because after watching it I didn’t even think of writing a fanfic. And you write tons of fanfics, while I’m too lazy to write one. :D Hai, Rabid Lola, I get ideas that could’ve been potential fanfics, but nah, I’m too lazy write. XD And I also have the habit of not finishing what I start *grins very very broadly*
But this is still a good fic. Well-begun once more. :D And you’ve got a little typo (typo in in parenthesis):
“Eiko looked thoughtful. ‘Well, I’ve only known you for a few months, but you’ve got more spirits hanging around you (that) anyone I’ve ever seen before…’”
Think that should have been “more than” instead of “that.” Ja! *sticks this review on your forehead on top of the picture of Ban and Himiko together then leaves* XD |
 Snickerer 5/1/05 . chapter 1 *grins* Aw...
Yes. Just yes.
This is nicely original, a welcome change from the usual cliches here. Not to mention sweet and a lovely idea.
I especially loved the beginning.
Heh heh, scowled indeed... |
 Calisto 4/21/05 . chapter 1 Wow thats a cool story too bad they cant cross over. I feel sorry for your friends sister. If i were in that position i would freak out and be terrified. |
 psychedelic aya 4/14/05 . chapter 1 Wow! Based on a true story, eh? Cool. :D I liked this. Galeng, galeng. :D Its very original, the plot. :D Not to mention pwede talagang mangyari... muwahahah. Aw, Haku and Chihiro are so sad, but so cute. And the rest of the crew are so lovable too! Mwahahah.
I actually watched Spirited Away ten times (or more, LITERALLY... tawang tawa nga sakin yaya ko eh...) in hopes that maybe, something magical would happen and the ending would change and Haku would stay with Chihiro, or something... but then again, the ending is perfect as is.
Go you. :D Hope to read more from you! :D |
 Wielder of paperclips 4/14/05 . chapter 1Put an opening quotation mark in your summary thingy. _
She had(SPACE)strange luck with loose change, for instance. A ten-yen coin in the street, a couple more in an old coat pocket—things like that.
“He looks nice.” She grinned a little. “He scowled like anything, though, when Tokuma-kun tried to ask you out on a date.”
- placed here for my amusement. _ I've already told you that it's difficult to imagine Haku being jealous, and I still stick to that. But... the OOC-ness of it seems appropriate somehow. Funny, too.
“Haku was selfish,” Boh complained. “He only told us a few months after.”
Haku sent a little glare in the child’s direction, and No-Face let out something that could have been a laugh.
- Amusement again. The OOC-ness of it makes me laugh. Hahaha.XP
Haku turned to her, and seemed a little…embarrassed. “Er…aside from the fact that I knew my name…Boh helped.”
- Third OOC-yet-unusually-appropriate line I could find. Place here due to amusement and wonderment. GASP, you made Haku OOC and got away with it!
As usual, lola, you've done an outstanding job, and, as promised, this is going on my favorites list. FINALLY, a decent Spirited Away fic that does the movie justice. And you were able to pull it off with some Haku x Chihiro fluff, too. Yayness.
Chihiro seemed a little...OOC also. But then again, who's to say she isn't really like that in Highschool?
OOC-ness aside, this is a great fic. I felt like writing a fic myself after I read it (but, as usual, my head didn't want agree with me so I ended up re-reading the whole thing and checking it for grammatical errors...). Thanks for Inspiration-chan, by the way. _
And...Eiko is cool. _
Don't want to pressure/beg you to write more Spirited Away fics (difficult to write, what with the great Miyazaki being its creator. XP) but if you ever do manage to write another one and put it up here, I'll have you know I'd be very happy. _ May I thank you for an incredibly vague reason? You don't know how long I've been waiting to read a Spirited Away fic of this caliber. Thanks again and keep up the good work. XD |
 INVICTUS0628YAHOO.COM 4/13/05 . chapter 1 Ei, this fic was definitely something. And to think I've chanced upon this some time during midnight. It scared me quite a bit. Anywayz, gud job I must say... |
 Kabashka 4/13/05 . chapter 1 First I read your awesome Getbackers fanfiction, and later on, I find you write a Spirited Away fic? Good GOD! How HAPPY that made me! |
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