I'LL KILL THAT GUY AT THE END! >:O "They put on quite a show"! Gerr... *seethes*

Random person: (cough) Erm, but weren't you the one reading them kiss while drooling--?

GAH! Silence... that was different... o.0 Okay, anyway... GREAT FF! OMG, I loved this story. Great plot; hated that servant-girl though. Nice work!

Just wanted to say your story and your writing are great. I love the Dante reference and basically everything about the chapter :)

Interesting, is there a sequel to this or more chapters?

amazing story i know its been well over a year but you HAVE to write the sequal

...So that's why I didn't remember the plot; I never finished it. I feel smart today. So. Party, being carried off, Shizuru's approaching homecoming, Aoi admitting she borrowed the speech, thought process, and of course, Highly Inebriating Mixed Entertainment. Ah, bliss. And just when we thought it couldn't get much better, Natsuki comes screeching in on her motorcycle.

But then things with a cousin (brother, uncle...?), and Shizuru still hasn't told her about her family's involvement with the First District, and there's the matter of the business and- things. (Dontcha just love pronouns?) I wonder if that sequel will ever be written, or even if it's still thought of. Either way, at least I have a conclusion to a part of it. Still, the curiousity... (And I still have a fever. Gah) Anyway, I'm glad there's still that one part of the wall there. Isn't that odd? But it's realistic, so. Sorry for the rambling. ^^'
~Naolin

ah... only just discovered the beauty of Mai HiME...
and i just couldn't help but read through this fic in one go.

It was all so great! i love all the dilemmas and everything you had them go through. But yay! i take it as a good ending.

Please tell me there's a sequel to this fic of yours? I'm dying of desperation to see what else happens!

That was a wonderful resolution to a **/Nat relationship but i think that the ending is like a cliffhanger to me. Akhito-kun needs those pictures why? i wonder. it looks like a sequel. and i hope it is. haha. i think i posted twice begging for a sequel. meh. anyways. the scenes were very :Aw...:--ish. i loved it. XD

renny-chan = a fan XD

I feel like i should review thoroughly. lol. So anyways...after reading the story again, i have to feel for touro-san. to love someone you know that will never return your feelings. shes my hero. XD oh and Chapter 9 was powerful [again]. haha. i still feel the raw emotion between them. [fan-girling again. lol] anyways this chapter had the knight in the shining ducati motorcycle picking up the stressed out and newly appointed CEO damsel in distress. cute and very amusing.

renny-chan = XD

very sweet! through that a very unexpected development...and don they ever close the windos?? i assume that how he got the pictures

what can i say? beautifully done, very emotional too, through way too much angst for my liking, im more of a humour/happy guy^^ but what ever works!

ah, now it gets interesting. wonder what would happen next? guess i just have to read if i wan to know. and tis fic is good! yup, forgot to say that earlier in the previous chapter, so here it is *thumb up*

i forgot how much i loved this chapter...sigh. just that one paragraph about their brief kiss. sigh. how utterly...romantic. lol. im a fool when it comes to romance. lol.

renny-chan = a fan :]

I was looking through the reviews to check if i reviewed this story because in my head i thought i gave a review. i decided to read this story again [i think its probably my 4th time] because i love the way it is written. The way Shizuru is portrayed here is amazing. just like shizuru should be. Gah i love Natsuki too and Touro is cool. i feel for her, she reminds me of Chikane's servant in kannazuki no miko. but anyways if you are up to a sequel i have to say PLEASE! hm...or make another one all together. XD Kieli-san Kakkoi!

renny-chan = a fan

Omg..i just read this whole fic in one seating. This story was really good. I really enjoyed it. Your writing style was great and this was well written. Hope to read more from you in the future. Nice job.

Peace out-> Keiko-chan

My latest apology for this review. I could have sworn I wrote a review, but lazy me. I was hit too late. Anyway, I can't believe this is the end of the story. I love all the angst and the turning point of the happiness but then...with Akihito showing...I couldn't think less...maybe angst again. There's so many possible things that could have happened if it continue.
Please consider, I agreed with some reviewers and await for the sequel.

To date, I still cannot excepted that this was the end of such a beautiful story. I really love this Shizuru. It had grown in me, the perfect person, the type of person who had one heart for one person only. She's wealthy and powerful, but the only thing she want is Natsuki. You really sure sonsider writing a second part of this story!