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loretta537
2009-11-04 . chapter 1
so good, i think they need to sit heero in front of a bunch of dvds and get him a little info on acceptable behavior :)
Gold Silk
2007-07-31 . chapter 1
You have no idea how many times I have read this fic! It always makes me laugh out loud (really loud to a point it's actually embarrassing)
KatsyKat
2005-10-01 . chapter 1
I agree that this doesn't seem like the end to this story. Heero is still NOT housebroken. But it was a great start! I hope to see it continued!
Aya-chan
2005-06-25 . chapter 1
i love this fic!! Heero is flippin' hilarious!! continue pleez!! ^^
Baculities
2005-06-04 . chapter 1
This is hilarious, had me laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes. I'm really looking forward to the next instalment you sort-of promised...
Seraphim Grace
2005-04-15 . chapter 1
Please continue this amazing series, please, please please. I wish i could write like this.
I-Heart-Manga
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
ROFL! OMG I love this series...it Is a series RIGHT?
I think that another chapter is in order... I DON’T THINK THAT THIS IS FIN! Don’t leave us hanging! I mean it. I thought that the last one was going to be a one shot w/o follow up - and that was ok...but this plot clearly deserves another chapter...OR more...
I like that Heero doesn’t quite have a hold on humanization, but knows what’s supposed to happen - its so cute! Dumb, Dumber, and Totally Insane could use a little revamping. While just as sweet they are, they just seem to be over reacting, AND reading too many mag. quizzes. I mean is the entire Preventer force having those kinds of problems?! Lmao
Keep up the good work and UPDATE soon!
FlamencoPenguin
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
Yes you should have one more- at least. The conflict has not been resolved yet.
Oh, and by the way, I loved this:
"They didn’t do labels, just each other." I was laughing for a good five minutes. Some call me easily amused, but eh.
Heero is very cute in his silly protectiveness and Duo is very kind and brave to put up with him, I do believe. I hope that Heero learns about human emotion enough to satisfy Duo and that they can live happily ever after.
GundamPilot03
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
This is great. I really want to know what happens next.
camillian
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
hahaha...this is good! the prequel of this was hilarious as well! update again soon and i can't wait to see what kind of mess quatre, trowa, and wufei are gettin themselves into!
Demonforged
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
I love it! I ended up laughing my head off in some places. Please do update!
Stardancer1
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
I can't quit laughing. Poor Duo he really ought to know that just giving Heero books without explinations or maybe limits is dangerous. He just doesn't understand that the world is not always out to get him. Have to say not always because they both are Preventers.

And as much as I love Shakespeare, handing Heero a sonnet is not quite the way to go. Heaven help them if Quatre hands Heero Romeo and Juliet...LOL. Duo would kill them all.
Lady-Frisselle
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
Please you have to write another one...I NEED to find out what happens...
annonie
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
While entertaining, this didn't seem up to your usual writing, technically speaking. The first part of the story seemed disjointed. There are spelling and grammatical errors that I don't believe I've seen in your previous stories. Going through it once more should correct those mistakes with little effort. This review is not posted to discourage you from writing more, just that you might want to re-read this part for errors and flow.
Mithros
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
... heero is completly clueless ^^
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