Great, now you made it interesting, and there's no more chapters! Dammit!

What happened?
You only submitted the prologue! It's been 9 stinking months, man! I want more!

Hi there how are you?

I have to say that I read your Jak and Dax meet coke, bubble gum, and coffee, and also I read on my own two wings, and foresight, and I am just going to say that I have read them and loved all of them and I am going to put you on fav author and author alert, but I have to say:

Where did you get the idea to make Jak blind? cuz I once thought about making him deaf, so... Is it just me or do we have the same muse? well, mine doesn't talk to me much anymore, so I am stuck in Zelda parodies, but I AM going to do Jak and Dax fics. someday... I love the stories you write and I am definitely going to read lots more!

This was very good...it was interesting, very interesting! I liked it! I can't wait for more, so plz update soon! Good work mate! ^_^*

Izzy aka ShalBrenfan

EMILY- DON#T DARE DELETE THIS IT#S TO GOOD. *mad face* or I'll be back and it won't be pretty, Ha Ha Ha

Hi. Its Whiskers. AWSOME!! This is really Awsome. What the hell was that thing? You have GOT to up-date soon.

Ha ha Torn is in trouble. Ok that wasn't every nice. what is that thing that crawled into the back of his head? please update soon.

Did I read this correctly? An "Against Time" SEQUEL?! I don't care if it's only "semi" sequel, it's awesome! So we're going to have some happy-dappy JaKeira fluff, right? :)
~P

A: Have you been watching the Mummy or the Mummy returns?
B: If Torns dead, I shall never forgive you! ;_;

By the way, great chappie! Keep it up!