 bakayaro onna 2008-01-26 . chapter 3I don't know how these slipped by me...
I love your take on these young men. I love your inner Eiri and how Shuichi is not spineless.
I miss you in this fandom. Hope all is well with you. |
 Chaoslace 2005-07-24 . chapter 2I'm only on the second one but already I love these. Short and episodic, but very sweet. The kind of scenes I flip through the manga to find. ;)
Also I just wanted to say that this:
"Angst, Eiri, angst! See Eiri angst! Watch Eiri pimp the ladies with his angst."
...cracked me the hell up. ;) |
 Eveilae 2005-05-04 . chapter 3I liked the second one best personally. I am a sucker for angst. Huzzah for the second Gravitation fic I've ever read! |
 thekatgrl 2005-04-17 . chapter 3This is oh-so-nice. Continue! Continue! |
 ShimaGenki 2005-04-14 . chapter 3Aw. .o_o. This was adorable... |
 Neko Kate-chan 2005-04-14 . chapter 3You did this idea so much better than most authors ^^ |
 tangerine-asuka 2005-04-14 . chapter 3So sweet! Love this!
Love the dedication Yuki wrote... it was so funny and cute! |
 Kitty in the Box 2005-04-14 . chapter 3man! i love them all! you ought to write more and more and i shall read and read all of them! you captured them quite well and i also love your little author notes at the end. they're quite witty. |
 Ildreen Love 2005-04-13 . chapter 3My, my... let's see...
First:
Such beautiful words to show him how much he loves him!
Second:
I bet thousands of fans wll shoot you if Yuki had burned his lips... though I'd offer myself to 'kiss them and make it better'...lol
Third:
I admit shamelessly that I used the same cliché not too long ago... there something about it that it's irressistible.
So I loved this three drabbles, are there gonna be more? If not just know that these three are perfect and beautiful and definitely, on my favs list. |
 Ildreen Love 2005-04-13 . chapter 2Yay!
We all love Yuki angsting over his feelings and Shuichi's!
Ah... I envy him so much... to have someone to love you like that...
...sorry, got carried away. |
 Ildreen Love 2005-04-13 . chapter 1Me... likes... fluff...short...
Ahem. Sorry.
What I meant to say was: AW! That was so cute!
I've read lots of drabbles with lots of Shuichi's POVs, but this one is the best!
So short, yet so good... |
 wendyghost 2005-04-13 . chapter 3yep!! u are so right he those have such kissable lips
! |
 wendyghost 2005-04-13 . chapter 2how cool! Eiri is so cool! |
 wendyghost 2005-04-13 . chapter 1great! really good love ur pov! |
 cleo 2005-04-13 . chapter 2 That was...dfuighuig! (So cool, I had to invent a word it, damnit!) I read both tracks & I don't think consistency of writing style matters in drabbles. The inconsistency itself lends that element of variety to the collection. Anyway, great work. This is undoubtedly one of the more sophisticated gravi works I've read in this site. Hope you add more tracks soon. |